Reviews for Taking Advantage
MistressWinowyll chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
Deceitful, and yet I find no fault in him.

Great job.

Your Mistress.
raw666 chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
now that is funny, I wish you continue it.
tatewaki2000 chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
What a funny story.
AppleFromTheTree chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
Father like son indeed.
LoPe21 chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
That was hilarious. I hope this isn't just a one shot.

But the cake was rei and asuka.

oh man I hope you continue this.
ArmorOfGeddon chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
You go, Shinji! Poor kid would probably die of happiness if this happened for real!
Previlion chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
I busted a gut reading all of this. Very funny.

scott pike aka bigreader chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
that was hilarious. loved it.
Lesto Vetrois chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
Interesting fic.

I like it! :D

Do we have a next chapter? :)

Don't Ever Stop Writting!

Haan chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
Ye gods, pure awesomeness. Thanks for a few happy moments.
Amoral Philosopher chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
Wow...that was awesome! I got an amazing chuckle out of that one-shot. The ending was perfect. I got to admit, you do a wonderful job when you write one-shots. I point this out because it is usually hard to find an author who can actually write an enjoyable story in just one chapter.

Once again, great one-shot and I look forward to whatever you write next.
raveman2 chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
I gotta say I like White Lies and for you to make it into this, it's perfect, you rock!
Winto-kun chapter 1 . 9/16/2010

That was... Wow.

I hope my sides won't split.
1337 chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
Maybe you should another story like this one and have it as a full story
ENSIGN chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
please tell me this is not a one shot.

*Sees the complete status*


The amount of potential this line of thought would have.
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