Reviews for Careful What You Wish For
Rosajean chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
This is just too sad! :( Any chance you'd consider a sequel or a second chapter to make it all better? I'm a huge fan of happy endings... :)
Harleyzgirl chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
That was heartbreaking. I kept hoping that Em would come back and find Rossi upset and get the truth out of him as to why he set her free.

Any chance of a sequel? They could use a sperm donor instead of adoption.
dustytiger chapter 1 . 9/24/2010
wow poor rossi, this was so sad... i felt for prentiss too but wow, great stuff very emotional
VanInBlack chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
That was so sad... I feel for both Dave and Emily. Will you write a sequel to this? Something with a happy ending?
TML chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
Man that was sad. I almost feel bad for Rossi.
SlytherinQueen11 chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
Really good story! I loved it!
Angel N Darkness chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
you did a great job on this story... i love it babe... poor emily!
mummacass chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
Dave you are an absolute moron for letting Emily go!
LoveforPenandDerek chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
I enjoyed it. The only critique I have is to watch how many times you use their names in dialogue. A tip I read when I was first starting out is that its distracting to use their names over and over.
canny-bairn chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
Aww that was sad, not sure who I feel more sorry for :(
Michaela123 chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
aww that was great