|Reviews for Movement of the Stars|
| JoeLaTurkey chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
This is absolutely superb; full emotion captured with a minimum of words. You have a rare gift.
I'm doing my own Gabby/Ken fic and it was especially good to read some rare material on them, however brief. You portrayed that little moment perfectly.
| EruDaughter chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
This was beautiful. I love the moments you have captured here.
thanks for sharing.
| skywalker05 chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
The first one that really made me feel shivery was "Gentle", where you didn't even have to say that Samara was talking about her daughters. All of these are very nice, though, with the gravitas good single-sentence stories get. I didn't quite understand 4-should that say "unimportant"? It would work then. XD
Is 08 about the Reapers? Cause that's terrifying.
I like "Blur" a lot.
I'm not sure this is what you were going for, but I feel like some of the sentences are about different Shepards, especially "Change". That would be a really interesting one if Shepard is male.
Aaaw, "Need". Nice.
LOL "Mad". What did she do to him? :D
I really like "they don't yet have the language" in "Shadow".
Ashley's Bible! *sniffle*
"Stop" is mad creepy.
"Naked" also. Eek!
I may not ship them, but I really like "Wall". You've got a good sense of detail.
I think there's a typo or two in "Harm".
/ridiculously long review What I mean to say is this was a lovely little read.