Reviews for You'll Be Dead When Your War Is Won
KH-Scribes chapter 1 . 8/16/2018
God. This actually hurt me. Liz's speech is dead on though. Ugh!
Monk'ichii chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Booouh, it's so sad. But realistic at least. I so love their relationship, she's right "And besides you and me wouldn't work anyway.". But somehow, we want it happening... So suck that Avery is pregnant !

Anyway, your fic is great ! First, I thought that Jack and Liz kissing each other was awkward but the story turned in a way that I didn't expect. In other fics, they would ended up together but you had been faithful with the original story line and it's cool !

Thanks for sharing this amazing fic :)
XMarisolX chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
Very nice. I enjoyed the little asides, like the one about Frank. But the story really got good at the end. Her little speech was so in voice, and just summed up perfectly what was going on. And Jack's little s/*! at the end was just so him. Again, well done.
bean4green chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
please please please tell me you are going to continue this story! I love it already!