Reviews for The Morning comes, the Night goes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow! I love it. Pretty please update soon! |
![]() ![]() This is a pretty good story. It is sad and kinda weird, but that is what makes it good. Question, why is the name "Jamzin" spelled like that? Wouldn't it have been better if spelled Jasmine, or Jazmine or something? Just a question, the name is unique. It is pretty good and you should update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL that was weird Jazz should probably punch him :) if Jazz really is smart she will throw him in a fire too 8) Tristan Tristan poor Tristan... Division Paladin undefeatable team (if they get along ;)) I haven't seen the movies so I have no idea what went on... but this story is pretty amazing for first fanfiction. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha! You put me in here, and I told you it would be a good idea to put that as Jazmin's ring. Love those two songs, update soon, Erika. Anyway, how do you have time to update and write? I barely have time to do homework! Never mind, update |
![]() ![]() ![]() I knew it! sad that the dad died. Why'd you make him die, Erika? anyawy, good chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey didn't your mom gave you those a while ago? you wore them to school, didn't you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this song! great song for a great chap. |
![]() ![]() ![]() how sad, good chap though |
![]() ![]() ![]() you just had to use wikipedia, Erika? (shakes head...) good chap though, do you have an aunt josephine? excuse me, Seph? |
![]() ![]() ![]() you would've have fainted with exhaustion, have you seen how much homework we have tonight? Ughh! great chap, |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha, knife. (Annoying Orange) who are these two kids? You took our real art teacher's name, what no inspiration? Jk |
![]() ![]() ![]() The dream was a vision, wasn't it? Great outfit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Nice story prolouge. |
![]() ![]() That was, wow |