Reviews for a downward spiral
Shorewall chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
This is an awesome work about Tousen. The fact that you chose to try this shows your dedication to writing, and the fact that you did it well shows your craft. I love your use of dramatic irony. Of course Tousen would not be aware of what a hypocrite he has become or else he would stop. We, the viewers, or readers, and his former compatriots are able to see what he has become, but he cannot admit to himself that he has gone astray. Although, at death, with nothing left to lose, he is able to objectively look at himself and admit his failure. I really came to terms and accepted Tousen's character through his flashbacks, wig out, and death scenes. And you explored that further in this work. Bravo.
Hasty chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
I hate it when you write horror, you know that? This is written so creepily well that it'll keep me up for days.
River Jaeger chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
I've never really thought about his character this much. Very introspective .