Reviews for She Was His First
Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2017
Carlisle asks about his wives...WIVES? as in Edward has a bunch of them? and he fuckin asked ROSE to be his wife? OMG I'm gonna throw up!
you want her asshole? have her, but NEVER touch bella!
Vagabonda chapter 1 . 1/26/2017
So enjoyed this. Thank you.
JustARead chapter 1 . 6/11/2016
Nice fic
Montara chapter 1 . 6/5/2016
I love that she recognized him as her mate even as a human and always wanted to be with him! And that Edward was a good lord who took care of his own!

Thank you for sharing! Love it!
midnitereader chapter 1 . 2/29/2016
Awww, what a sweet sweet love story. He saw her and knew she was meant to be. She saw him and knew he was meant to be. I loved how he came for her and she went willingly because she knew she loved him. The night that changed everything they gave into their urges and gave each other pleasure. He was sad to change her but he saved her in the process. In the end they got to be together in immortality, in love forever. Sigh...
Crystalena chapter 1 . 5/15/2015
Unique, emotional and beautiful! I loved this, thank you!
jk chapter 1 . 5/14/2015
I really don't get why Edward took wives if he didn't "want" them he can have companions without marrying them! and he wanted rose I about stopped reading right there! fucking gross!
all it does is piss me off
the11thdrtwi chapter 1 . 2/5/2015
I thought this was a chapter story I was so excited! but none the less very GOOD! thax
mamaruti chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
Great story. Well written and intriguing to the end :-)
thenerdgeek chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
Interesting...well done.
TeamEdward-aka jacobhater chapter 1 . 7/21/2014
Incredible. Ending was was just so haunting especially with those crows. I think the whole deal with the crows have this an eery feeling to it that added to the ancient setting it took place. Just loved it overall. It would be amazing if the story continued. Imagine the pair as one of the oldest pair of vampires that still exist up till the present 21st century. Roaming the Earth at a relatively low profile. Idk just a thought. My imagination wanders a lot into the what ifs.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
Fascinating. Well done.
Debby-1957 chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
I loved your story! Very well written with great detail. It was a shock when she was hurt but thankfully it ended well. Thank you!
Adelheity chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
This is one of the most beautiful stories I' ve ever read. I really enjoyed reading it and reread it often. Thank you for sharing it :))
meelee72 chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Oh. My. Gosh, woman, that was Out-Flipping-Standing!
I somehow came across "Their First Elevater" before this story & only AfTeR I read it did I realize a prequel existed... so I put it on bookmark & JuSt got around to reading it.
It was so full of wonder & stirred up feelings in me that I can't really place. I so adored it.
I mean, ur mind is truly a wonderland.
These characters are so beloved to me. I could see the whole story, rich in colors & pictures, facial expressions... Alis.. a little mystery, herself.
Isa, obvilously, so full of life & trust. Thank goodness he saved her from sure death. I know it's what she wanted, glad he was quick thinking.
I loved Rose & Edward's feelings for her.
& the way Erik was honored at the end was lovely.
The old world-ness was captivating.
I very much adore this story. It's been fasinating & intriguing.
I am so going back to re read "Elevater."
Thank u, again, for sharing ur fabulous work!
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