Reviews for One Piece : The Lottery Lottery Fruit
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26
SBS? SBS! Holy shite Cross is pirate jesus! All hail the god of noise and his squishy human companion!
bjorn aleswiller chapter 1 . 8/3
So... Ummm... Similar to Sengoku? He turns into what I can only assume is a giant golden Buddha...
Zakara chapter 5 . 5/1
The deity is Susanoo.
Ender the multiverse Detective chapter 9 . 4/26
Very good
gabeclone chapter 5 . 2/14
I like how you handled Luffy's new devil fruit power. A problem that a lot of one piece writers have when giving Luffy a different devil fruit is that they immediately give him the most powerful devil fruit they can either know of, or in some extreme cases, can possibly imagine. they don't understand that what makes Luffy's struggles in canon interesting is that he's actually struggling. He has a relatively weak devil fruit, but he makes it work for him in a BIG way by just becoming incredibly skilled in it's use. Things would be boring if canon Luffy's devil fruit was the magma fruit or the tremor fruit. You gave Luffy two items that are incredibly powerful and only he can use, BUT the powers of the items are not intrinsic to him as a person. That places certain limitations on him, that he's forced to make up for with the rokushiki techniques.
Guest chapter 7 . 12/22/2015
Love the omake.
sachin6291 chapter 9 . 5/22/2015
How about instead of Galdino and his partner (Mr.3 and Miss. Goldenweek) you place Bentham (Mr.2 Bon Clay) and his crew, who disguise into Straw Hat and separate everyone, lay traps for them, with intent of defeating them
sachin chapter 6 . 3/11/2015
zefff ate his foot thats crazy maan...
he cut it off
WeberCode chapter 9 . 12/9/2014
Sequel , please
DragonFire Princess chapter 9 . 12/7/2014
Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
To make it less likely that someone would have gotten this fruit and ruled the world with it, maybe say it. Can only be gotten by the loTtery fruit
Theon Azul chapter 9 . 11/1/2014
Please dont quit on this story, its awesome! Dont stop, and UPADTE as soon as soon as possible if you r still there
TrustyFoxy chapter 9 . 9/27/2014
Is this going to be a harem fic? Or, just Nami?
quirkybread chapter 7 . 7/9/2014
I have a few SBS questions for you! :) When will Luffy get his bounty if Zoro was the one who got the bounty from defeating Arlong even though he didn't beat Arlong? And what will Zoro's bounty be from "defeating" Arlong?
quirkybread chapter 4 . 7/9/2014
Please introduce the Supernovas early, preferably Law and Kidd. :) This was an awesome chapter, and I loved the sword idea! Luffy sword AWESOME!
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