Reviews for One Piece : The Lottery Lottery Fruit
Primordial Serpent chapter 1 . 11h
Kami-kami no mi means paper-paper fruit
Mas2009 chapter 8 . 5/2
and here he beat smokey easily? WTF
there is something wrong with you
Mas2009 chapter 7 . 5/2
too weak
i liked canon luffy better, he was weak and did not get beaten up like this
tanithlipsky chapter 9 . 1/24
very good
bye chapter 2 . 11/21/2016
reading like 18 lines before giving up, no literally, thought of giving up when you said the god god fruit, and then you said that fucking line where Luffy says fat ass hoe, and where he says he's gonna be the ruler of the seas, as mentioned in the anime Luffy was questioned why he wanted to conquer the seas and Luffy replied with something about no not wanting to be the ruler but the freest person in the seas.

anywho you're literally god modding this guy and making him super op and super smart and super douchebag.

and I thought that the lottery lottery fruit would be like the gamble skill on bravely default where the attack can be maximum which is 9999 or no damage which is 0.

it would be amazing to see Luffy gamble his luck on his life. but you ruined it, thanks author.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2016
SBS? SBS! Holy shite Cross is pirate jesus! All hail the god of noise and his squishy human companion!
bjorn aleswiller chapter 1 . 8/3/2016
So... Ummm... Similar to Sengoku? He turns into what I can only assume is a giant golden Buddha...
Zakara chapter 5 . 5/1/2016
The deity is Susanoo.
Ender the multiverse Detective chapter 9 . 4/26/2016
Very good
gabeclone chapter 5 . 2/14/2016
I like how you handled Luffy's new devil fruit power. A problem that a lot of one piece writers have when giving Luffy a different devil fruit is that they immediately give him the most powerful devil fruit they can either know of, or in some extreme cases, can possibly imagine. they don't understand that what makes Luffy's struggles in canon interesting is that he's actually struggling. He has a relatively weak devil fruit, but he makes it work for him in a BIG way by just becoming incredibly skilled in it's use. Things would be boring if canon Luffy's devil fruit was the magma fruit or the tremor fruit. You gave Luffy two items that are incredibly powerful and only he can use, BUT the powers of the items are not intrinsic to him as a person. That places certain limitations on him, that he's forced to make up for with the rokushiki techniques.
Guest chapter 7 . 12/22/2015
Love the omake.
sachin6291 chapter 9 . 5/22/2015
How about instead of Galdino and his partner (Mr.3 and Miss. Goldenweek) you place Bentham (Mr.2 Bon Clay) and his crew, who disguise into Straw Hat and separate everyone, lay traps for them, with intent of defeating them
sachin chapter 6 . 3/11/2015
zefff ate his foot thats crazy maan...
he cut it off
WeberCode chapter 9 . 12/9/2014
Sequel , please
DragonFire Princess chapter 9 . 12/7/2014
WOW!
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