Reviews for The White Lotus Rebellion
Guest chapter 1 . 8/21
dude you have the worst sentence construction I've ever seen .your story had no substance to explaining things you just continued to leave us in the dark for three quarters of the chapter and that's annoying . I also don't think the hokage or any ninja village would allow a low level ninja to wear elite gear or uniform signifying they are anbu when they are merely genin, it's just common sense .I also wouldn't think they would allow a person they don't know who is dressed like an anbu to contented in the exams. like he could be a spy or an your story idea was superb but why the hell make him do kido ? they are literally thousands of techniques in naruto plus just because nobody else in your story or naruto can do kido doesn't make them more deadly.
TheWiseGamer chapter 2 . 9/10/2014
this story was interesting with naruto finding out who his family is but when you practically made naruto a god in terms of power out of no where i lost interest especially how Sai joined him it's not a bad fic it's okay i'm just personally getting sick of naruto getting immensely God-like out of no-where and wanting to destroy the village
Toby860 chapter 4 . 8/4/2014
its a good story.
shadowreaperzx24 chapter 4 . 10/1/2013
will there be more?
killer4853 chapter 4 . 5/16/2013
plez update
killer4853 chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
love the story
Michael Bourne chapter 2 . 3/22/2013
nice move theere son
Ehlonna the Demoness chapter 4 . 3/11/2013
More please I want More
Agato - The Hadou Inari chapter 3 . 3/10/2013
So I am to believe this fic is dead then? Seeing as how your lazy ass has left it to rot for three years now.
bishop chapter 4 . 10/23/2012
cool
yukinari chapter 4 . 10/16/2012
interesting please update.
Remzal Von Enili chapter 4 . 10/14/2012
I have a question, you said naruto is similar t o aizen and has his own hogyoku, does that mean he'll have hybrid forms like aizen?
erching chapter 4 . 9/15/2012
It's looking good keep going someday please
ikmss18 chapter 4 . 6/22/2012
Update soon please can't wait to read more! :D
Agato - The Hadou Inari chapter 4 . 4/13/2012
You have GOT to get back in the groove and continue this man.
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