|Reviews for A Midsummer Night's Dream|
| Emerald snake eyes chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
this was just so breathtakingly beautiful i just love it. it just made me so warm and fuzzy on the inside but at the same time sad that Archie could not bring himself to trust so easily. your a brilliant writer. your so descriptive it just makes me melt on the inside. you deserve so many more reviews!
p.s is there going to be another chapter because it dose not say that this fic is complete? if so then i look forward to reading it!
in the mean time i might check out your other fics!
| KarasBroken chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
Simply excellent. A very realistic view of how their first time might go. Not uncomplicated, not perfect, not without pain or doubt, but still loving, still an act of hope.
Some wonderful little details, the use of dreams, reading their palms, Horatio writing down the nights that Kennedy has fits, and the idea that Archie was willing at first, with Jack, and that damages what is starting with Horatio.
Thank you for being brave enough to post this.