Reviews for Rage Against
Amanda chapter 8 . 10/9/2012
IN THE NAME OF RORY! But seriously, that aside I felt this scene was well written. It was simple and expressed the emotion of both characters without getting too sappy. And as far as them never saying the word "sex"...I feel that was realistic for these characters in the story you're portraying. A lot can be said without saying things and I believe that's what you've shown here.
DareOfTheDawn chapter 9 . 4/26/2011
I'm still totally confused by where this story is going, but I am open to many ships and look forward to future chapters.
crimsonpuddle chapter 9 . 4/7/2011
We don't need another filler, I promise we don't... :P I still resent you for hurting my Rory :[ But I look forward to the next chapter, I think. :P
crimsonpuddle chapter 8 . 4/6/2011


Plot-wise, I am intrigued, and you must update FORTHWITH! Not even sure what that means, but do it.

Constructive-criticism-wise, I really liked the last two sections, but I think the decision and kiss section could have been a bit more descriptive? Maybe a bit more focus on the kiss? I understand you don't really write romance, as you say, so of course it's not going to be perfect first time :P

But it seemed a little short; for example, the "Then the Doctor kissed Amy, and Amy kissed the Doctor" part did TELL me they kissed, but it didn't really SHOW me. Get what I mean?

Anyway, as you say, you're not experienced in writing romance, so I'm not exactly expecting some epic scene from a classic romance, but yeah, those are my pointers :P Hope this doesn't sound harsh " You just need plenty of practise ;D ;D ;D
crimsonpuddle chapter 7 . 4/6/2011

No time to review, gotta read on. :3
crimsonpuddle chapter 6 . 4/6/2011
Aww, poor Rory :( I hope you make him happy again before something inevitably shitty happens to him in series 6 :P

Nice chapter and yay for updates! :D
IfEaRnOfIsH chapter 8 . 4/6/2011
AH LOVED IT :D Its awesome, y'know :D The last scene was extremely tasteful and it was very well written - you've got that gift of something writing abstact things that I can't quite perfect, dammit. Ah well. It was awesome :D
MayFairy chapter 8 . 4/6/2011
for a first go at a romantic scene, it was absolutely fine. don't worry about it.
the scrub chapter 8 . 4/6/2011
fantastic story. please update soon.

MayFairy chapter 4 . 9/30/2010
i really love this story! i am guessing that river thinks rory is the doctor? anyways can't wait for more.

i liked the thing with jane austen.
crimsonpuddle chapter 4 . 9/29/2010
OOOH, nice ending. Can't say I expected it, Amy never struck me as the motherly sort, even when she was pregnant :P
crimsonpuddle chapter 3 . 9/24/2010
As soon as I saw "President Snow", I thought OMG IF THAT'S A HUNGER GAMES REFERENCE I'LL LOVE YOU FOREVER.


Anyway, great chapter! Very tense and mysterious, I liked it :D And I guess a hint at River's age would be helpful, but hey, it keeps us guessing! :P
MaryandMerlin chapter 2 . 9/24/2010
wait, not jack...rory? hang on seriously she knows rory!
MaryandMerlin chapter 3 . 9/24/2010
river likes jaaack i think, this could get interesting but how can she not know the doctor? hmmmmmm


mnm x
Donna Tempus chapter 3 . 9/24/2010
Hmm! Intrigueing!
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