|Reviews for Writing on the Wall|
| stripes31 chapter 5 . 10/11/2010
| KakashiXIrukaLover chapter 5 . 10/9/2010
You have me hooked on this couple now :) Loved this!
| oh velveteen chapter 5 . 10/8/2010
I loved this to bits! Exquisite, as always! I'd become so consumed by this world you created that finishing this, I felt a weight lifting of my own chest, as the characters did as well.
"Come home with me."
After all the building to this moment, such simple, honest words just sliced the tension cleanly apart.
What really fleshed out this story for me were the little details: the coffee table's penchant for attacking Alex's shins, the cats, the movements of an adam's apple beneath lips...just sublime.
Lastly I just have to say: thank god for Petey! He takes and gives so much, and the conversation with him was hysterical; I laughed so hard! Thanks for a great read.
| KakashiXIrukaLover chapter 4 . 10/5/2010
Poor Alex and Chris and yes damn male pride :( Something needs to give here, hope one of them takes the step :) Great update hope for another soon!
| KakashiXIrukaLover chapter 3 . 10/1/2010
Poor Chris he needs to open up his mouth before it's too late :(
| Punk81 chapter 2 . 10/1/2010
I really, really, really love your story!
I love Chris and Alex and it's great to read such
a great fic about them...
So, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
Please update soooooooooon ;-)
| User10272762 chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
Love them. So much! Can't wait for more of this. Sabin & Shelley are so hot together!