Lovely moment

Well done.

Now THAT was CUTE!

Great one-shot.

Kelly does visit him in the Hospital after the episode we meet her.

Awww that was adorably sweet! Great job :-D

sooooooo cute 3

I love murdock and kelly together! :)

and i really like your story :)

This was very cute. I love how Face interrupted them. Well, Murdock always intterupts Face, so it only seems right it. This was very cute and I enjoyed it. Great job!

OMG! That was SOOO cute. I'm not even a romantic and it got me. You wrote all the characterizations perfectly, even Kelly. I wished she'd been in the series more than the one episode!

Absolutely lovely! You walk the fine line between sweetly romantic and schmaltz so well with this one. And of course, I always love a great Kelly-Murdock story. Especially loved this image..."the earthy smell of leather, a faint trace of grease and the sweetness of clean air."

We should bottle it and sell it in artsy little bottles for $60 an ounce. I'd buy it! ;)

Nicely done!

aww that is a cute story! well done

AWWWWWWW!

Okay, so Murdock/Kelly is pretty much the most adorable thing ever, and you just made it adorable-er. Which isn't a word, but I just made it one so I can accurately review this ridiculously cute fic! I swear, I melted into a fuzzy puddle of goo.

And I definitely lol'd at Face walking in on them... and on Murdock's comeback because of course the team would have walked in on Face may a time, and the idea brings so much cuteness to mind. This rocked on so many levels. Faved for sure! :)

Hot jacket action! *giggles* Heh, that's every Murdockian's fantasy. :-D They can't catch a break, can they?

Aw that was too cute. Write more Murdock/Kelly stories please :).

I swear I was blushing when Face caught them! MurdockxKelly forever!