I like it, but it's not my fave. It sounds good though. Whatev. Good job, and...

DFTBA!

Holy crap, Luna. You're amazing. I got the chills.

*is shocked into silence*

~Doe(:

I have to say, I really like poetry. This is a pretty cool poem and it reminds me not to take life for granted. Anyway, cool poem!

Love it, Luna. It's really cool. Though is this in PJO, because I am confused as to how it is... *goes to check*

Thanks,

Des

(Sorry. I totally botched this review. I do love it though. *huggles tight*)

I love it, of course it is a bit strange to see something without capitals. I love how you put 'we' instead of 'I'. It shows that the Tatian army has some heart and coldness git heads.