Reviews for warheroes
Annytin the Nomad chapter 6 . 9/24/2010
nice job, but dont spend time on the intro, get to the actual story k?
Annytin the Nomad chapter 5 . 9/23/2010
*chuckle* wow dad, not bad, but u need to space the lines like i do, but other than that, not bad
Annytin the Nomad chapter 3 . 9/18/2010
ur kinda messy with ur sentence structure, but not bad

3 ur daughter, keira