Reviews for Dream of Crimson
neko142001 chapter 14 . 8/22/2006
Um...I seriously need a sequel here. Your story was great but I need more. Plus, I want Aya back!

Thanks for the story.
HisakiYuki chapter 14 . 9/8/2005
Well, lets just say I almost cried when Ran died, and you made me go into shock when I read the details of how Aya was killed...~-~. I think I sat staring at those words for at least three minutes. Neyways, I'm glad with the way it all ended, and I look forward to reading the sequel.
HisakiYuki chapter 12 . 9/7/2005
I have two chappys left to read, but I can't help it cuz I'm drooling all over the place. I was so tired when I was reading this last night that I read to the point that I feel asleep. He he he! I really really like this story and I love the way you have brought all of the events and elements together, while still focussing on each charater. It makes me feel sorry for all of them, exspecailly Aya. I hope he doesn't die off in the next chapter or two, but Bethany needs to die. He he he! *Evil laughter at the thought* Um, I think I'm going to go back to reading now.-
HisakiYuki chapter 1 . 9/1/2005
I have read the first chapter of this story and I really like it so far. I'll comment again when I'm finished reading the rest over the weekend...-. Keep writing.
QueenNarca chapter 14 . 7/4/2005
really great story.
The Invisible Fan chapter 14 . 12/15/2004
Wow... that was cool!

I just finished reading your fic all in one sitting. It was so cool! I like how at the end Aya comes back as a ghost and bugs Ken. _
Seph Lorraine chapter 14 . 9/19/2004
Wow. That was a good fic, if I've ever read one. Bloody fantastic.

The characterisation was fabulous, chapter length was good and lengthy, diction was beautiful. This fic has successfully distracted me from my homework for an entire weekend. :)

I really admire this piece, and though I support your idea of leaving out the pairings, I think this could've only been improved by adding them. I really like how you've done it, though. Your Ken was very well done, with very strong character. All of it was well done.

I loved your fic.
Yuki Valentine chapter 14 . 6/21/2004
wow! let me tell you Vikki that was a GREAT fic I just love the way you killed off Aya like that and the whole vampyre witches and supernatural stuff was fantastic I can't wait for that sequal you said you're writing Email me about it okay? I know that this sounds snobbish but I really would like an update about it and if you need Ideas I'll gladly share !

Lots of love and SMOOCHIES !

Yuki Valentine
She Rook chapter 14 . 3/28/2004
Wow, that was really lovely. My favorite part was the graveyard scene, if you hadn't put that in there this fic would have been alot more depressing. Oh, and I liked the way you did the battle with the demon lady. That had the potental (sorry if thats miss spelled) to be really cheesy, but you did an excelent job with it. The only real complant I have is that Ken is constantly getting hurt (not a bad thing) and never has time to recover, were he alive he would have died in the 7th chapter or so. I know that is really a minor thing, but you took so much care to make the story believeable that it might be worth trying to fix in your sequel. And by the way, I have fan art for you (don't get excited, I suck), but you dont get it till you write that sequel. Best of luck!
Enerim chapter 15 . 10/23/2003
o! I LOVE your story! _ i hope you continue. and make a sequel!
Aikawa Fuuko chapter 15 . 10/18/2003
Oh wow...great story...I like vampires, werewolves, and all...

You know, when I read to the part when Bethany poked out Ken's eye, I was like this: O.o; Bethany reminds me too much of Fuuma-san, and Ken as Subaru-kun! ;; It's like I read X/99 again with different characters...

Kenji...isn't that Kenshin's son's name? Oh well, whatever...

I like Yuumi...Too bad you killed her off. So many tragic, terrible deaths...I need some tissues...

I would love to read the sequence soon! And Kenji/Ken? Oh, that's cute! I like Kenji a lot! A Necromancer...err...scary...

Anyway, this story is really great. It's somehow...unreal, and that's why I like it! (I'm weird, I know...)
avocado girl chapter 15 . 10/15/2003
*sigh* i really enjoyed reading that, although... **glares at almighty authoress who decided to kill aya-kun** i'm glad he's still hanging around though.

can't believe I almost read all this in one day. ...I seriously need some sleep
Those who've layed eyes on a gundam won't live to tell about it Those are the orders I was given chapter 11 . 10/15/2003
I CAN'T BELEIVE YOU KILLED AYA! TWICE!(techanicly). But you said that there's more to it than that, so I'll bare with you and read it to the end(besides, I quite like it any way). but that was pretty harsh, making Ken kill Aya. Come on, the poor guy's got it bad enough don't you think? Or do you just like screwing around like that?(if so I don't really care). But hey! You're an awsome writer! I really enjoy this. I'm gonna have to read more of yor stuff when I'm done with DREAM OF CRIMSON. Later!

Heero_Yuy_Pilot01
Instant Orange chapter 15 . 10/14/2003
Wow...That's two days I've spent reading this..._ My am I slow...

My Aya-fan friend is ready to maim me (and Bethany) because I've only showed her the snippets where Beth' rips poor Aya's head off.

*wince*

'sh a great fic. _
carrothien chapter 15 . 10/14/2003
This was absolutly awsome. Everything about the plot, characters, ect. was great. After two days of reading, I finally finished it. And what is this I hear about a sequal, I can't wait to read it. Simply put I loved this story and can't wait to read more of your work.

carrothien
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