Reviews for The Way Home
Pyrosgaleforce4 chapter 2 . 2/9/2013
Fanfiction limits one review per fanfic, but I shall review again, because I want to clarify my previous review.

I do not hate you. You deserve to be able to express yourself as much as others, but when I look at the previous reviews, what they said wasn't pretty. And what I hear you do isn't pretty either.

In your bio you said you had impeccable spelling, grammar and wit when 'reviewing'. Perhaps you are a good writer, but that does not make you surpior to others.

Look, I'm going to spare you all the 'make peace not war' lecture. They say, "an eye for an eye makes the whole world blind", although in this case it would be, "a flame for a flame makes fanfiction burn". Perhaps, instead of flaming, give constructive critisicm and suggest on how they could improve. Like I said, you are good, but you abuse your abilities by flaming.

The Internet might be a place where people are untouched and be anybody they want, but people can still get hurt out here. Even a flamer like yourself.

One day there might be someone who might hurt you as much as you hurt others. Then, maybe you could realise how it feels, to be hurt by a flame.

You can delete my reviews if you want, I don't mind. I know you're probably laughing at me saying, "Who does this person think she is?" I just hope I got my message across. If you still choose to flame, I'll sigh and say I tried. I may not be able to change your approach to reviewing, but you can. Deep down, I'm sure you're better than this.

From a concerned author
pyrosgaleforce4 chapter 2 . 2/9/2013
Hmm...I have mixed feelings about this. It's good, but the amount of description is a lot to take in. It has a nice feeling to it, though.

So you're a flamer? Pleasure to meet you. Haters shall hate, so you can go and flame to your heart's content, but there are times when you go to far. But I suppose that is your job? To give criticism to 'bad' authors? See if they're brave enough to continue to write? Go and flame my story, I won't complain. It'll be such a pleasure to be hearing from you.
Mirjaan chapter 2 . 12/14/2012
To be honest, You have the power to write well.. but you cant just put the random emotions into each sentence! dude, calm the fudge down!.. readers need time to digest every feeling the characters experience... I think you can balance the feelings/adjectives equally.. that would surely help..
Pale Ice Rose chapter 2 . 6/8/2012
Very nice; but don't overdo the imagery and figurative language
aww. it's over chapter 2 . 10/31/2011
that was great you're realyy talented pleaz wrote more stories they're great
oceanwater sweet chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
that was a GREAT story! i LOVED the part when fabia threw him and he said that he wanted to sigh from the irony caues she LITTERLY had him head over heels. anyway keeo writng stories aabout shunXfabia
I LOVE IT chapter 2 . 9/24/2011
the name says it all. it really shows how shun carries about fabia and their love. i think the stroy fites them just right. PLEAZ write more SHUNXFABIA stories soon (don't go to the EVIL...shun.x...alice fans) *sorry for those who like it*
is that it NOO chapter 2 . 9/18/2011
the name say it. is it all becaues it doesn't say complete. if it is then write another FabiaXShun story PLEAZ!
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT chapter 2 . 9/10/2011
NAME SAYS IT ALL! i love it all. i'm a fabiaXshun fan. is that all the story or are you goin to write more? if so then soon and write more fabia and shun stories!
nopenopenope101 chapter 2 . 9/4/2011
Wow. Okay first of all, at first glance I understood nothing, but I convinced myself to read the story and ended up enjoying the detail and picture drawn to life by your words. I don't like flamers, but everyone has a reason, so that's another thing I don't understand. I don't want to step into anything and flare tempers. I guess I don't understand much, because I don't get why Fabia x Shun is bad... but I'm not really into Bakugan, so no one should take that as an insult to their personal opinions. A friend suggested it to me. You are a good writer, and I'm sorry to hear of all the fire fought with here. Again, not intruding, but you have a great power with words, and with power, comes responsibility.
Hidden and STDSD in our Flames chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
I reread your profile that said complaints go to star star just laughs at them. I have conducted that you are a. Rich snob and all that crap. Obviously your a bully. A rich bully. A spoiled brat. So I am not complaining or flaming , I am merely ' reviewing ' as you call it. I have no offense to blonds but you must be one or something. But I am hear to bring out the true you. I have calmed down to say this. You like everything you flame. You can't be mean for fun. Have you been abused or hurt or need attention. I think you want attention. I am not afraid of you because you can't do anything to me. You can't kill me so there is no reason to be afraid. We are brother and sister. We are related. You hurt to gain. So hear me out as I say that you have a big ego. We won't feed it. So here is where I state why you flame. STDSD would you please.

STDSD: what.

Me: explain

STDSD : oh well you didn't get enough attention so you flame. You hated it but you had to do something. You found here and unleashed your anger. You flame what you like but review what you hate or something like that. You also wrote things that people hate. No offense but ShunxFabia sucks. Everyone know ShunxAlice and DanxRuno rocks. Anyway you hated whatever didn't involve you. And other terms your a spoiled brat and if we could get ourselves to read you story ( shunxfabia sucks that much) we would. You don't suck and you don't deserve to die just like the rest of us don't. You are a great writer deep down inside. So people don't flame her and feed her ego. Do what I do and review her. Like now. Get to understand her and try to stop her like this cause every time you flame her she will continue to flame. Don't be afraid if her. Just be nice please cause nobody deserves to get with they get. Jazzgirl didn't deserve to be flamed and no matter how much she deserves it saltwater star doesn't deserve to die and get flamed cause in the end we're no better than her. So saltwater please forgive me for flaming you and lets start over new and nice. Hi my name is Hidden in the flameS me,STDSD. It's a pleasure to meet you and be your friend. But no being mean cause that's how you don't make friends. Have a nice day and don't get hurt. Goodbye friend
XxXMy-Place-Under-The-SunXxX chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
Hello, fellow ShunxFabia lover! What's up? xD

Well, I just want to say that this story was so cute and that haters can go to hell. They don't have a life and there are plenty of people who love ShunxFabia! :D

If you ever come back, keep up the awesome stories! :3

~VanillaCupcake798 (deviantART)
okay wow chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Okay, wow, you think you're like the greatest author ever. I checked your reviews: There are only 4 reviews that truly defend and support you, with nothing bad to say at all to you. Tell me im stupid, but whatevs. just sayin, if 4/32 isn't small, then the earth isn't round
A voice in the darkness chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
You are a very descriptive writer, but I'm not sure you have what it takes to be a good author. I have written better myself, and I'm not afraid to say so. I'm also not embarrassed to admit that I did hide behind an anonomyous name because I AM afraid of you: your hurtful comments are not okay, and you should feel guilty for emotionally destroying jazzgirl123. I couldn't take it if I did something that cruel. You can ignore me, but I don't care. I don't mind being an unheard voice hiding behind a screen name. You are too. Say whatever you want. Maybe someone else IS hurting others as your 'apprentice', but maybe not. You need to tell them directly that it isn't fair that they're hurting your 'image', but I don't put it past you to fake the whole thing. Look, it isn't right for you to go around hurting people for your amusement and bad reputation. I sympathize with all the people you've bagged. I can tell that you're the type to go make an anonomyous account and make people cry out in anger and pain just for revenge for standing up for themselves. The motto of is "unleash your imagination." You, however, have given it a bad name. This website is supposed to be safe. It's supposed to help writers express their individuality and receive tips for improvement, not to be stepped on by your rude conceitedness. I'm not going to yell and say that I want to kill you, that is a little too violent for me, but I AM going to say that you've ruined this website forever, poisoning it with your hatred. Please just be nice. You can call me lame and stupid and a wimp, but you'll never break me. I'll always be behind a screen name, just like you. You are whatever you call others. When I read your bio, I wanted to scream and cry and puke because I knew it was all untrue. Saying you're the best. I've heard it before. It's called conceited. I can't beleive you applaud your horrendous 'mission carriers.' That is sick. You think we are worth less than shower mold. Well, you hurt people's hearts. Flame people's souls. You are a tragic case, never to change. You'll never understand how powerful words are. They are life altering. But you'll never understand. Your words mean nothing. To you, they are useless junk that you take for granted. I'm not afraid to say that I am intimidated by you, but not by your 'awesome writing skills' but by your soul crushing words. I am afraid of you, you cyberbully. You are my worst nightmare, because I can do nothing to stop you. I am powerless. For now. We will find a way. All of us: jazzgirl123, Hidden in the flameS meSTDSD, Sharpay Evans 11, Epic Lemon, Breezyfeather, AliceXShunMEGAFan17,XxMoolightCharmxX, MssPerfect, and all the others of people craving the day you are defeated. I don't care if you or your dumb minions (who are potentially your imaginary lap-dogs) come after me with every insult in the book. You will always be a screenname. A cold, conceited screenname.
summerlilies chapter 2 . 8/13/2011
'Kay so first of all, I don't know what happened there with that 'emo author jazzgirl'(not flaming, she said it) but I supose you had to be very harsh to receive such amount of hating comments saying fuck you and die.

I'm not going to troll or flame you, in my opinion you are an awesome author and this story is the best I've ever read, I hope one day I can become half of the writer you are.

Next, after reading all that hater comments the only thing I can say is that if someone should fuck up here are all of those trolls that said die, and I'm going to kill you.

People come on, seriously?

One of you said that it wasn't nice bitching and snaping around but you come here and do the same... that's childish, yep I said it and I can repeat it. You can tell her to change her attitude and stuff but flaming her job is something WAAY different, probably you won't like to admit it but she is a GREAT author. Some of you said that it was difficult to understand and aweful; if you are used to really simple stories that doesn't need you to really get in and feel or understand the reading IT'S YOUR PROBLEM.

Personally I can say that what jazzgirl did was stupid. I don't know how harsh the comments were and I don't want to, but stoping your writing just for ONE hater comments when you know that like 13747678324 people love your story it's really shity. And no, being an emo it's no excuse.

Whatever, if some jazzgirl crew or even herself want to act bitch and snap my comment or even kill me you are totally welcome, I'll wait for you here at mexico, I mean if you can make it here without being killed by some hitman.

- Peace, and love haters! ;)
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