|Reviews for La violoniste et le cancre|
| potterywheel chapter 3 . 8/16/2013
Oh god this was lovely and so heartbreaking! Please update the last part— oh god your writing is fabulous and so, so–
it drowns me— oh god.
| t chapter 3 . 3/13/2013
It's a little saddening to think that I won't know what this legendary ending will be like.
The development of their relationship is candid and has an innocence to it; an innocence that only writing about love and discovering the wonders of it can have. That said, you've managed to temper this with just the right amount of fantastical realism to keep it from devolving into teenage banality, so props to you for that (Y).
Legendary ending, damn it!
| Novelist Pup chapter 3 . 2/3/2013
bruh i want this legendary end
what do i have to do
to get this legendary end
i'll do whatever it takes mate i swear
| SvelteAmare chapter 3 . 7/14/2011
How horrifying that this isn't finished quite yet! Your story is wonderful: subtle, romantic, charming and most importantly well developed. It is a shame how poorly this particular couple can be written. I am waiting for this legendary ending with bated breath, please find some time to satisfy my need to know!
| They-Call-Me-Orange chapter 3 . 6/21/2011
Um... how about that legendary end?
I suppose I can't whine too much, I never really finish anything I write myself, but still, it'd be a shame to see this piece never get a proper ending. It was so thoroughly well-written.
The characters jumped right off the page... er, screen? They were incredibly vivid. You communicated a lot through subtelty, taking care to detail the small gestures we do almost unconsciously that tend to be the most telling. An intake of breath here, a brush of fingertips there, a smile that's just a bit too wide. It's a nice, refreshing change from the usually very blatant details most fanfic make use of. Your style in particular shifted the focus from dialogue (the most prominent and easily used tool of fanfic writers, I think) to actions and it really worked well for you.
This whole thing was just wonderful, and I'd really like to see it continued some day. Or, barring that, perhaps you could tell me what WOULD have happened in the last chapter?
In any case, I'm really glad I got to read this. Thanks for posting it.
| Sailor Swifty chapter 3 . 11/14/2010
can't wait for the lst chapter
| Sweet Rose of Thunder chapter 3 . 11/1/2010
I loved all 3 Chapters and can't wait for the next!
| Crosswood chapter 3 . 10/29/2010
Aha! Now this is a rather excellent thing!
Impressively, the emotional intensity which has been built so steadily hasn’t abated in the slightest. The story is compelling; plot has unfolded gradually, but is quite clearly now present - especially in this third chapter. The character development over the course of this has been so smooth and seamless that when I wandered back to the beginning again I was a trifle surprised. Michiru is sympathetic and natural, Haruka is charming… it’s very impressive! Am I gushing? Sorry, yes, but it’s a damn fine thing you’ve written here and you should know that.
Thanks for posting this up, and regards
| xXxSmartCookiexXx chapter 3 . 10/19/2010
wow so michi is going to paris, poor haruka! but you say the end will be legendary! hope you keep them together, update soon! bye!
| Mantaray chapter 3 . 10/19/2010
Jeez..I almost think of some serious illness Michiru might got. The morning headache she tried to avoid was only a hangover. Phewwww...that's much better they are only apart by the distance not by different life. And I can't wait to see what the legend you will show us.
P.S. Even though you used those short paragraph to tell the story but their love and passion were really nice and subtle expressed. Well done!
| Bainaku chapter 3 . 10/19/2010
I just... love this so much. Something about Haruka calling Michiru 'hon' literally made me tear up too. I read the whole thing with my teeth stapled into my lip because I had an idea of what was going to happen and... and... YEAH, the ending BETTER be legendary and GOSH write it soon, okay? This is killin' me! In a good way!
| Proz-milo chapter 3 . 10/19/2010
Such a great story! The last chapter better be legendary or else I will be very upset... lol
| petiyaka chapter 3 . 10/18/2010
It must be christmas this evening!
Another wonderful chapter of one of my favorite fic.
First time going out. First time. But Michiru about to fly away.
Poor girls! Do you intend to separate them already?
It was excellent! I like it! Thanks for updating.
(yes in english this time!)
| Lookin for the truth chapter 2 . 10/13/2010
omggg this is stunning! love ur writing style! please pretty please update soon? D
| Bainaku chapter 2 . 10/8/2010
Wow, I meant to review this sooner! My apologies for being so late. :(
I have to say, I'm incredibly curious as to where this is going (surely your intent) and I'm eager to see more - both because I want to know what's got Michiru so vexed, and because your writing style is so fabulously unique. Please keep it up! More, more!