Reviews for Dumbledore's Mistakes
thephoenixandthedragon4ever chapter 1 . 2/14/2016
Different but enjoyable
missgsmith51 chapter 1 . 4/26/2015
I wish you would detail what happens to Dumbledore due to his arrogant, inept handling of Harry following the deaths of James and Lily. Did he just get a royal arse-chewing from Madam Bones, head of the DMLE ... or did he actually have a trial? Any fines or perhaps some community service, so that he learns how to properly handle placements of orphans? His negligence of Harry, even in canon, should have been grounds for some sort of fines, lawsuits, etc. JM2K
Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
Weird... I'm not sure what to think, T.B.H. Snape as Headmaster - wonder if and/or how that'll change things...?
Finwitch1 chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
Liked it. yes! It could have happened, too. Since Dursleys conditioned Harry to not ask questions, and generally 'not to be a bother', I find it even more likely that Harry never asked anyone. Particularly since the first person he asked was annoyed at the question and considered it impolite or something.
Griffin Raven chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
Abolutely brilliant oneshot, though personally I'm very sad that it wasn't longer because I thought it would have been an

utterely brilliant story if it was longer. Or alternatively if there were a further story/or stories about what happened; (a) about the exposure of the wizarding world to the muggle world & exactly how the mess was dealt with; (b) exactly how bad was

young Harry hurt in the accident; (c) how did the ministry try

to deal with the numerous problems caused by the wizarding worlds exposure indirectly by young Harry's traffic accident but also by the grave mistakes that Headmaster Albus Dumbledore made in regards to Harry's wellbeing; (d) who was hired to replace the missing staff; (e) what diguise did Albus

assume in order to hide out at Hogwarts; (f) would the new Headmaster Severus Snape, see able hiring himself & Minerva an administrative assistant to aid them with all of that useless ministry paperwork; (g) would Severus finally be able to address the number of problems with the schools curriculum; (h) finally be able to see that Gryffindor/Slytherin houses didn't take potions class (or anyothers) together; (i) how would Minerva handle becoming young Harry's new guardian along with her other responsibilities to Hogwarts (ie transfiguration

professor, head of house & deputy headmistress)...hmm, I definitely think she needs a deputy assistant or to hire another professor to lessen her workload with her becoming Harry's guardian...dependent upon what injuries the poor boy did substain?
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
This is a very nice fanfic-it's so nice to see Snape's contribution recognized for a change. For one thing, I suspect bullying by any house will stop (he did not have a clear hand when he was actually Headmaster, because of the Carrows. What a pity he could not arrange an accident for them both).
Cerulean Night chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
a nice little story, i do wander what happens to harry but i do not expect a sequal as this story as i understood it isnt really about him i think severus would make a great headmaster, especially the way you usually write him thanks for another good read :)
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Superb! I would like to read more of this story however! I think how it is handled from here would be extremely interesting. After all some of the Muggle World does know about the Wizarding World therefore letting a few highly placed police officers in on it and after an exam of Harry and finding his abuse some Social Workers as well would make a superb story!
Sick Teletubby chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
Of course I enjoyed it and very much at that! Thanks for another brilliant story!
crazzyredhead chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
i think you could right more to this story it is a good one and i hope you will add more
lady sakura cosmos chapter 1 . 9/24/2010
good story
I Fell Into Yesterday chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
This was something new, and I loved it. You write very well.
ffanfiction chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
FriendofMolly chapter 1 . 9/20/2010

You are the Queen of AU's I loved this. Of course I felt bad for Harry, but it will change Wizarding History a bit.

PSay chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Wow! This is really different. I am very sad that Harry was hurt badly. The fact that Hedwig tried to find him and couldn't was sad too. I'm glad that Dumbledore realized he had to resign. In this instance Severus was the right choice. I look forward to more if you decide to write it. Thanks for a different kind of story. pms
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