Reviews for White Swan
cebinc chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Very well written! Your great at telling a story and writing lemons.
Hope Edwards chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
oh pls continue with this story it would be great so great
Skent94 chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
So good...please write more...the story sounds awesome!
Skent94 chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
So good...please write more...the story sounds awesome!
mummyanimal chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
Omg! That was HOT! :D loved it. Are you going to continue it? I'd live to Read more on these two x
nomore.fake chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
LOVEEE IT! First, I was surprised when Edward didn't kiss her, but it was so much better this way. great job! :)
Harry with a mustache chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
I loved it. You're a really good writer...
foreverlybound chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
Great story. :) Very cute and well written.
gemma loves edward chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
I loved it thank you for writing it :)
TaintedSunshine chapter 1 . 9/18/2010

That was amazing

You truly have a talent

I had butterflies throughout the whole story

It makes me want to fall in love so bad :P

Edward is so ... I can't explain it..

Perfect, loving, thoughtful, charming, sensual, powerful.. The list goes on.

I would love to read about their dinner date and a possible future of the two

And i really like this bella; how shes strong, confident and witty

Not the self conscious type in twilight - not saying i didn't like it but i just like this side of her better

Keep up the brilliant work, im always astonished by your words and i find myself on the edge of the seat wanting to read more :D
Lettersie17 chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
CONGRATS! so happy you won Judge's choice for this! You deserve it, I loved this O/S!
suemason chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
OMG That was great, I loved your story, and the image of Edward in a Coast Guard uniform, though it had to be the Australian Coast Guard uniform, I'm not sure what the US uniform looks like, sorry. I'm glad she encouraged him to continue to follow his passion, and that it shouldn't change because he find someone to love. Nice.

Thanks for your story, most enjoyable.
timidvampire chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
i LOVED this! the image of Em and E in their uniforms...lovely. your descriptions were perfect. great job x
Belindella chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
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