Reviews for Behind the Mask
haidomo chapter 31 . 12/14/2020
i love your history tidbits here! I always reread them after each end of the chapters,, not gonna lie i learned more hiatory facts here than the book lol
Kladenperros chapter 51 . 12/10/2020
I intended to post my review here, i didnt select well the chapter.
Kladenperros chapter 50 . 12/10/2020
I just have no words. This last chapter was one of the best things that i have read here and i have seen some very good stuff. The historical information is amazingly deep for someone who dont know much of england story,the characterizations were wise and the narrative and dialogues were concise and with a good management of the tension. It does mix well some topics from tragedy and classic storytelling such as the death of a boy as a turning point and the unstoppable decay of the "hero" into his moral demise. The story as a whole has a broad emotional scope, given that it is told by the perspective of an amnesic little boy,which encourages us to empatizhe with him. The first chapters made me doutb but i hoped that lather it would get better(And i liked the premise) and i was correctly rewarded. Besides, seeing the story of the entire life of someone told as if was alien to him felt phylosophical and made me reflect in my own life and deeds. The use of mythology for explaining some thing as well as other of your headcanons related to magic was enjoyable also and painted the world with a personal and broader view of the history of those lands. I will read the next chapter if you return someday, this story has given me solace during some bad days.
Yusakin chapter 33 . 7/23/2020
I... I just named the "dark voice" Tim after Tom Riddle and it's really hard to take it serious anymore. Btw love this story. It's my 7th time reading it
haidomo chapter 24 . 6/23/2020
i really love the idea that nations can nation-hop. it just seems so natural for them to be able to do it
haidomo chapter 23 . 6/21/2020
i love reading the author's note bc i there are interesting historical facts that you write. world history, mythology, and foreign languages are few topics that i enjoy, u see so thank u for the autgor's note contents i guess,
haidomo chapter 18 . 6/17/2020
Noooo no one likes feeling abandoned :(( ugh this is so sad i just wanna hug him sighh
haidomo chapter 17 . 6/17/2020
- rather than annoyed, i feel like smacking myself on the face for not thinking about the spirit of the little girl! She was featured in the anime ffs (or was it the drama cd?) AND england is at japan's right now. All i can think about rn was "whh didnt i think of that?"
- i cant blame usuk for that long overdue talk about independence, i mean closure to a strained relationship with a person you were so close to before is hard to attain :/
chibi-unicorn-girl chapter 51 . 2/26/2020
I’ve re-read this story several times since it first started coming out... we eagerly await your next chapter! I hope life is treating you kindly.
Purasuchikku chapter 1 . 12/30/2019
Zoe Otaku chapter 5 . 11/23/2019
I'm up to Chapter 49 already but I'm still bugged with this Chapter (5) that I just had to come back. You can•not• inject Chinese traditional medicine. The particles aren't small enough and your body can't break them down in the veins (i felt a little faint imagining it). The best you can for an injury is apply it on the skin, and for cases of poisons, consume the medicine. I'm sorry that I had to write this on a review and not through a PM but I hope you change it plsOther than that, I've been fangirling over this work and you have messed up my sleep
Mikki chapter 51 . 6/26/2019
Hello author! - I hope you are doing well! I actually read all your chapters a few years ago and I still absolutely love your story andhow you managed your characters and their dialogues! I enjoy every sentence.
I actually wanted to send you this year's ago when I first read your fan story but was too shy to. However years later, my curiosity regarding what happens next in your story never left my mind! Will you continue the story? Please do! and alot of your readers must be lost to the suspense as well.
Please continue your story please don't let it end up like hetaoni (another great story we don't kno the real ending of) ;-;
Oh and years ago I wanted to tell you that my country Pakistan also believes in fairies and such things, we consider them to be one of the jinns. So, just saying that when Pakistan called England crazy cuz of his beliefs, that sounded harsh and of course sceptics are everywhere these days but majority of us do believe in such mythical creatures
Also, please continue u don't hav to write a lengthy story if you can't but please tell us what happens -, - I love your writing :3 thanks for making my days a whole lot better - n I mean it
Guest chapter 31 . 4/4/2019
I'm sorry but the Spanish Armada was an attack on Britain not Britain attacking Spain.
Rina chapter 51 . 3/1/2019
Hello. I really liked this story and I want to ask, can I, please, translate it into Russian?
bilo99 chapter 51 . 1/29/2019
Hello, first thing I wanted to say is... you're fantastic.
Your writing style is unique, when I was reading it seemed to be there, together with the characters, I was completely absorbed in the narration. Every single part, is accurate, I never have found descriptions that could feel so "real", reading this story was an indescribable experience and when I'm saying this, I'm not exaggerating, I can assure you.
I appreciated as well the way you have portrayed every character, especially England's brothers and England himself, their love, rage, guilt, sarcasm, sad and happy moments, everything about them. Seeing the brotherly moments was adorable, especially when Scotland and Ireland are reconciled after that painful memory, but I also loved the interaction between Ireland and Northern Ireland, I really adore them, yes, maybe they don't have exactly the "perfect" relationship, but...they're so cute! I'm really interested in the way the relationship could develop. Wels is a bit overprotective, but who can blame him? Is understandable, I think, even if America really did help England in a positive way (aw, also they are adorable). In general, this story is really beautiful, there is so much to say...
I have read it two times, because honestly, I have take your story to heart, also learn a lot, between history and was wonderful.
I really, really hope you'll update soon, I know that you have not done it in a very long time, probably you have other things on your mind and a real busy life, but I hope nonetheless. It is worth the wait :)
PS: sorry if my English is not right or accurate, unfortunately it's not may first language.
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