|Reviews for I Never Saw This Coming|
| Alex Warlorn chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Yeah. It was kinda a disappointment that Elise never found out how much she was being played. In particular when the Sage Owl told her she needed to cut her puppet strings to become a proper hero.
She who can alter the world through sheer will, it would have been interesting to see her greatest strength truly tested.
| ShizuShizu-Nyan chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Just finished the game. Love the game and your fic!
| Peach the Hedgehog chapter 2 . 9/20/2010
I think this is a good idea for a story, but I'm having a hard time reading this because the paragraphs are so big, and it is straining my eyes.
To fix that, when a new person is speaking, start a new paragraph. It is much cleaner, and easier on the eyes too! I'll be able to read and give a proper review then.
Oh and welcome to the My World My Way section! I really wish there were more stories on this game.