|Reviews for At the Centerfold of the Storm|
| Glumski chapter 61 . 8/8
Ahh. What I mean to say is that I find this abrupt ending quite vexing. Honestly, I don't have a clue what I've just read but it might just be one of the most glorious pieces of fiction I've ever seen so far. The plot, characters and style of writing are all top-notch obviously and I very much appreciate that instead of the KiGo pairing being the final goal of the story it's instead something that happens more or less at the beginning. I also don't remember a story this huge being set in a timespan this narrow - it's somewhat mind-boggling that so much can happen in so few days and still be completely believable! And then there's the fact that most of it is actually utterly fascinating slice-of-life stuff while the action pretty much boils down to only two scenarios (of which one is what I suspect is planned to be the supersized grand finale).
But honestly, this story is amazing and I hate to see it abandoned. Especially since I'm rather sure there'd only be a few chapters to go.
| SwordMasterZ chapter 1 . 3/24
| Guest chapter 61 . 2/22
I hope one day you will return.
Until that time your relatives have my condolences for your untimely demise.
| Guest chapter 60 . 2/22
I thought those two were screwing around in their warm cockpit, apparently not.
| Guest chapter 56 . 2/22
Also stabbing bullet proof clothes should be about the same as stabbing it with a blunt stick.
It might have winded possible, but wouldn't have resulted in a dead Kim.
Nope Adrena didn't really stand a chance.
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/20
That coffin joke isn't a joke.
Still it got me to laugh, mostly at the idea of how can someone find this funny.
Then the stark and horrifying reality kicks in.
And worst of all..
It sounds entirely too plausible.
Thank you for writing this.
Even though it's actually quite horrific.
| Tenchi Knight chapter 61 . 2/19
What? There's no more? What in the world? Seriously? Seriously? There's no more?
Drama aside, I'm totally enjoying the story, and I look forward to conclusion. If and when you do complete it, I am sure that it will do justice to the story you've already created. Thank you for posting.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/19
I do believe you topped the 500k views.
Now I hope that with a new chapter (hint hint wink wink) you'll top the 1m mark.
Anyway I guess I'm going to reread this.
Thanks for writing this in advance.
| Tenchi Knight chapter 38 . 2/17
Okay, so I know I said you were a bastard in my last review, and quite frankly, you still can be. I wanted to say though, when I heard Kim's message, it was great. It really was. The way you framed it, the way it played out, really struck a chord. I don't know if you're a member of the LGBT community, however that was a brilliantly written piece of propaganda. Now I don't want to use the word propaganda and a negative sense, please don't take it like that, I'm using it only to Define exactly what it is, which is a piece of art which tries to get a message across. And it's a great message. I honestly hope that there are other members of the LGBT community out there who are struggling with their own sexuality who come across this story, and reach that point where they read the message, and it strikes a chord with them. You've done the community a great service with this. Thank you. That said, this story is a bloody roller coaster, filled with laughs, gasps, and more than a few exclamations of Oh God. :-) this story is definitely going on my favorites list. Thank you for writing, and I know I'll be reviewing in a future. :-)
| Chaotic Harlequin chapter 4 . 1/28
well that was unexpected. That's why you always watch your step.
| 0mniessence chapter 11 . 1/27
YASSSSSSS KIIIIIMMMM KISS YOUR GIRRRRLLL
| 0mniessence chapter 10 . 1/27
omgg they acknowledge their growing attractionnnn
they're so lovely
| 0mniessence chapter 9 . 1/27
lol monique catching them the morning after
| 0mniessence chapter 8 . 1/27
your backstory of her getting raped being the reason she quit team go is so believable!
kim comfort your bae!
| 0mniessence chapter 7 . 1/27
poor kim :(
i'm glad shego is adamant about protecting her!