|Reviews for At the Centerfold of the Storm|
| Will bob chapter 45 . 3/6
If they could ever make a movie of this fic
Then this chapter would be the one that would be used in all the trailers. :-)
| only-looking chapter 61 . 1/25
Just wow. I only started reading this a few days ago. I had been putting it off because it's a (currently) 61 chapter story that hasn't been updated in half a year, and I really hate geting emotionally invested in an epic story that might turn out to be dead. I am SO glad I went for it now. Great characterization, an amazingly complex plot, character development for everyone, and of course incredible Kigo. Rowwr. Fantastic writing all around.
Honestly, I didn't see how you were ever going to be able to top the whole volcano incident, but you managed to somehow. This story could have ended there and still been one of the best action-oriented KP stories I've ever read. But no, that was just the teaser. This...this is freaking AMAZING.
I wondered at first if Kim was getting a little Mary Sued, but really, she's the same as in the show, just all grown up and thinking more. Which makes sense, as everybody else in her family is a genius. Besides, who cares anyway? She's tremendous.
Anyway, enough fawning. Thank you for writing this, and I truly hope all your RL issues resolve themselves (and thankfully, they seem to involve work and not something bad) soon and give you a chance to come back to it. Just 5 chapters left, right? Right? I wanna see the photo shoot!
| MagicalChaos chapter 61 . 12/20/2013
If I could make one wish for Christmas this year it would be that this story would pick back up. it really is one of the more well thought out and extremely entertaining Kigo stories I have ever read. The action, the adventure, the in story down time (which of course is composed of some awesome battle foreplay before its inevitable bedroom action), as well as the growing potential of the stories future that grows with every sentence. I might not care for Disney and I might only know of their version of the KP universe but I thoroughly enjoy this work and wish it picks back up or at least continues to its conclusion if I cant get an encore.
| jim89 chapter 13 . 12/19/2013
Wow , I have a lot of sympathy or Bonnie here, last chapter. She went into how she was self destruct due to her failures. To find out that most of her failures are from how she was trained to handle things and all of them orchestrated by Junior. He was basically setting her up day one
in a way, this is all Kim's fault she put Bonnie literally in harms way here. And you could say from that created all of Bonnie's twisted plots. It's obvious that what juniors going to doodler will get much worse. Bonnie might've been a bit of a which in high school. But nothing she's ever done deserves that treatment she's getting here.
And this is just an earlier chapter, God help me what I get for the rest
| GabrielBlade chapter 61 . 11/5/2013
Let me just start by saying this: you are a *magnificent bastard*. I stumbled on this story a while ago, but last night I really got sucked in and read chapters 5 through to 61 in a single sitting, cause once I got to the big shebang I just couldn't bloody stop. I was awake until 5 FREAKING AM cause I just couldn't stop.
Every so often, I thought I'd got to a chapter that would let me put the phone down and stop reading, but nooooo, you just had to go an keep one-upping yourself with better and bigger cliffhangers. Every. Single. Time..
I think I'd hate you if I wasn't so utterly and really enthralled by the gritty and realistic world you've built, and the amazing characterisations you've developed for everyone, even characters I never really liked.
I want more! I NEED more! This is like crack and you are my dealer, have pity on a poor junkie!
| SolarrApple chapter 31 . 10/23/2013
OH MY GOD, I know I should have reviewed earlier but one sentence in this made me die with laughter.
Just mental imagery of it killed me.
"Shego EJACULATED in outrage."
I fuckin' can't! XDDD
| Revya Median chapter 61 . 10/20/2013
| Sir Muffin chapter 61 . 10/16/2013
Update, you little fluffer! If you don't do it soon, you won't get a muffin and you'll be grounded. Love, Dark
| Darkshadow-lord chapter 61 . 10/1/2013
| kim fan chapter 61 . 9/24/2013
| Guest chapter 61 . 9/21/2013
So good! Can't wait for the next update, this should prove to keep being an interesting story. :)
| deathgeonous chapter 61 . 8/15/2013
Hmm, I missed the update. Darn. You know, I'm not surprised that this fic has won so many awards, because this fic is most probably the beast Kigo fic in existence, and there are a ton of good kigo fics. Well, thanks for writing this, and bye for now.
| honoradele chapter 27 . 8/13/2013
Standard request: Please, can I have some more?
I hope that you include Anna getting a Pulitzer for one of her pictures!
| Reader101w chapter 61 . 8/3/2013
Cool new chapter,
Thanks for the update at the beginning, that really helped regain track of everything.
So, how many plans are left that have at least somewhat survived the chaos of this multiway battle? With the exception of Nane and Possible, there is no one who is still heading in the direction they intended to go.
I hope to read more on this soon.
Keep up the very good writing that you do,
| EagleGamer15 chapter 61 . 7/27/2013
I was afraid that you'd post another chapter by the time I finished re-reading all the previous ones lol
I had forgotten how long this story was, and although your re-cap at the beginning was helpful, I STILL had to go back and re-read to remember what you were re-capping (that and I wanted to enjoy the story again lol)
Still as good as ever, and eagerly awaiting the next episo-I err...mean, chapter ;D
Out of curiosity, where do you work (if you're allowed to say)? You keep mentioning it, and I can only assume its in television. Just wondering if I've seen anything you work on.
If you can't say, oh well...I'll still be waiting for Chapter 62!