|Reviews for Karakura Adventures|
| Kage No Asashin chapter 7 . 1/4
omake was ... ... fucking weird
| BlackDragon Uchiha chapter 31 . 12/5/2013
Plz update soon.
| strykerhl chapter 2 . 11/20/2013
DUDE I SWEAR I WILL DEMAND YOU! I ALMOST LAUGHT TO DEAD!
You are an excelent comical. I like it!
| MagicfoogieA chapter 30 . 10/12/2013
Anyone who's picked up the new 12th volume for RosarioVampire will start to find Kahlua's role in this story very ironic. Evidently, in the omake part of the volume, Kahlua actually doesn't know a damn thing when it comes to seducing someone, asks Miyabi and the other Fairy Tale division heads for advice when Gyokuro gives her a mission to seduce someone (to which they all laugh at her for), and then winds up having to watch a porno with Aqua and Koko lol. And did I mention Kiria's hilarious response to this too? "I could show you but...I'm not really into girls."
| MagicfoogieA chapter 31 . 10/12/2013
This isn't so much a review for a single chapter, so much as it is the story itself.
I do like what you've done with the story setup but like with all two-part stories, the first part seems to clearly be the better of the two for reasons that other reviewers have said and that is mostly in Ichigo's character regression/stagnation and the stagnation of Moka's character path (which you ultimately solved by ridding yourself of her through Fairy Tale lol)...only to evidently replace with her Kahlua, not sure what path you have in store for her but hey, that's why I enjoy reading your stuff. _
It's especially strange for the amount of tension and drama put into Moka when ultimately...the problem of Moka can simply be solved with finding someone to make her happy. (coughReviveUlquiorraDammit!coughcough)
I can't say that I'm a big fan of the whole TsukunexMizore pairing, but maybe that's just because I never thought Tsukune was a good character. In fact, I think he's kind of a tool at times, almost a bit like Orihime lol. (coughLikesTheIdeaOfHitsugayaxMizoreAndByakuyaxRub ycoughcough)
I realize this story generally is centered around Ichigo being dropped into the plot of Rosario Vampire and having the story being written around that (with the occasional cameos every now and then of different characters) and I understand how throwing in other Bleach characters can potentially clutter up your story but surely there can be ways to implement more Bleach characters into the story right? For example, a lot of Ichigo's friends play a pivotal role in the kinds of battles he faces and yet I have not once seen Uryu Ishida in this story. Is there a particular reason you refrain from writing in more Bleach characters into the story other than believing it would clutter up the story?
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/1/2013
Man I gotta say I enjoy your writing and I enjoyed the story but...what the fuck is moka doing in there? It looks like you just threw her in because she is moka... I mean, if you want to do that then give her Tsukune but all she really is, is a third wheel and it just makes nothing happen between Ichigo and Kurumu. I mean, check it out... You literally forcing her into the relationship and the cycle keeps repeating which really just turned me off of your story. Another point: Ichigo was about to go down on Kurumu and he decides to finally be a man and blow moka off but no, no, can't have moka not be with your main character of the story so let's just let his hollow take off and practically fuck moka outside where they were standing.
2 much drama, repeats and forcing going on. Sorry bro but, as I said, turned me away from the story rather fast and I tried forcing myself to parts where it solved itself out and they could do their thing but damn, you gotta add another 1 or 2 girls in the mix to fuck things over for the main pairing. Hell, Tsukune and Mizore have more shit going together than the main pairing. I liked the rest of it and all but. c'mon really? Why force him into a Harem. There are enough harems on this site and everything I see them I scroll down towards the next story in hopes that a random nothing had 5 of the hottest women in the world sucking his dick.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
hoping for an update soon.
| Guest chapter 31 . 7/15/2013
i love this story and everything about it so please write another chapter and what happened to the hollow dog creature thing?
| TZJoey chapter 7 . 7/7/2013
Thanksgiving is an American holiday I don't think that Japanese people celebrate it.
| Kratos Pendragon chapter 31 . 6/18/2013
I read this story a long time ago way before I even had an account, and I must say I'm so glad I found it again because it is even better than I remember. Please update soon!
| Constantin3e chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
And it begins again.
| Arkisenn chapter 24 . 5/31/2013
I have a question. Moka needs blood, Tsukune's blood, to sustain herself since she's a Vampire and all Vampires need blood? Yes? Yes. Well, we never see Kokoa drink any blood. How does she live?
Transfusion packs. Moka had Tsukune so she stopped needing blood packs, but since Kokoa is never seen drinking from someone it's implied she still relies on the packs. Not that much of a stretch either since Moka stated Tsukune was her first and Kokoa is younger than her. As to where she gets them, it's a school enshrouded by violence, their infirmary is practically a hospital from what we've seen of it. So yeah, it would have plenty of spare blood.
| Arkisenn chapter 9 . 5/29/2013
It's a real shame you turned the sequel into a harem fic. That seriously took away the charm of the first story. I'll keep reading, but to be perfectly honest, I don't classify this as a real sequel. Ichigo's feelings in the first story were clear, he didn't want to hurt Moka's feeling, but she wasn't the one he loved. However in this "sequel" he basically loses that bit of mature character development and instead just sort of pusses out and roles with it. That is completely contradictory to the Ichigo you wrote. What's worse is you made that same amateur mistake of letting your fans dictate your story by doing a shipping poll.
So while I can happily favorite your first story, this one will never be on my favorites list. As I said, I'll still read it because it makes me laugh, but I just can't take it seriously. Ichigo and Kurumu's relationship while frustrating at times was very deep and well written in your first fic, but you can't delve that far into a relationship with a harem story because you have to dedicate equal time to the growth of each girl and that slows/shortens the character development considerably.
| FreeTraderBeowolf chapter 31 . 5/26/2013
Nice how you integrated the new dynamic of Ichigo in and Moka gone into the scenes with Marin and Sun.
| Meech Macko chapter 31 . 5/25/2013
Not much to say...seems like a filler when they are supposed to sort out Moka and as like before Ichigo seems to have forgotten about all about Moka and remains blissfully ignorant when it was partially his fault why Moka got fed up and left coz he never gave her even a glance...and now they are enjoying...
Well, until next time...