Reviews for that silly little word lust
kingslayers chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
Merlin that screwed with my head.

Shh, Rose darling, don't cry. One day he's gonna wake up and realise what a jackass he was, and what he lost. And then honey, he'll know too. He'll know how LOSS feels. But knowing he'll be the same doesn't stop it from killing you, sweetheart, does it? So cry and cry your broken tears, then wipe your tears off your pretty little face and close your eyes. Cos, baby girl, that's the last time you're going to let something (loss)[lust]{love} turn you into a whore, right gorgeous?

I'm sorry, I can't resist having kinda freeversey reviews. But this one was so damn... I don't know, sad?
deathpale chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
Beautiful in a cruel and cynic way! Loooooved it though I feel sorry for Rose. Damn boys, they really are oblivious...!
Sam Storsky chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
I seem to be favoring your last lines a lot, since this one was my favorite, too: Because it was a hell of a lot more than lust.

Great job!

Love,

SAM :)
Ella Ridell chapter 1 . 9/24/2010
Fantastic. Love the poetry
P.o.T.t.Y.F.a.N.x chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Wow. I'v enever read anything like this before - but I really liked it! In fact you've inspired me to write something like this! Really good :D x
DD chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
Woah...

I like it though