Reviews for Almost Newly Improved
Guest chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
"Oh, Sonic…" she whispered. "Why'd she have to die?"
Says every cosmo fan that ever lived
JazzGirl123 chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
So sweet, loved it!
DanceDream chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
If those two weren't fifteen and twelve years old instead of, I dunno, twenty-one and eighteen, I'd be screaming at you via bold type that they SHOULD'VE REALLY DONE IT! But, circumstances being the way they are, instead I'm going to tell you that this was a super-sweet fic! I loved it, it made me smile!
jazzy of the Akatsuki chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
aww! thats a nice story! kinda cute to!

it was really good!
The Pen Vs The Sword chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Sword: Gah! They were soooooo close! *chokes Pen until he passes out*

I think you captured the characters really well. And, since the ending frustrated us as much as anything SEGA does, I'd say you did an excellent job. Now if you'll excuse us, we're going to go swear up and down like sailors.
Reaper The DemonGoddess chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
i love it girl/boy that was a cool story

love,amy
Metal the Hedgehog chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Astounding, amazing, and incredible, this story was. I hope to see more.
ZehHyperactiveAuthor chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
YAY! I like it! Keep it up! Happy Writing! _
madisnk chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAH HOW CUUUUTEEEE
IHeartSonAmy chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Almost...I like it. It doesn't say that he definately does love her, or that hates her. But he just...hints at it.

It's nice that he cares a lot about his brother, and tries to understand what he's going through.

It was written really well too, I don't think I've read the first version so I can't compare it with that.

Anyways, I loved it, great job as always. Good luck with your other fics...xx

Chao ;)
SilverDawn2010 chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Aw, that was pretty cute! :D They almost kissed... almost. Really cute! Nice job!