Reviews for Inheritance
Jpx0999 chapter 4 . 3/19
shit,naruto realized the shadow clones potential
DarkHunter10 chapter 10 . 3/8
Pretty good.. Reminds of that that thing Iruka did... But you DO have to admit the ANBU are suspiciously absent during MOST things.(nearly COMICALLY so). Not bad at all, but I am shocked that ANY actual "learning" gets done, with the amount of "tests" thrown at naruto all the time...
DarkHunter10 chapter 9 . 3/8
Shouldn't naruto's REAL name been announced at team assignments? I thought that was the WHOLE POINT of this story... "INHERITANCE" and they were supposed to get to it way back, when Sarutobi was talking with naruto in chapter 2.

Like most stories.. You gotta wonder "how lax is the security in THIS village?".. IWA now? Like the HATED ENEMIES of konoha.. Well Sound just casually strolls in and out (and the akutski too) whenever they feel like it, so why not? Despite there supposed to be a "chakra barrier" around the entire village at all times... And of course as stated "where is the anbu?" but then again, anbu are a lot like cops in the old-time batman show, they NEVER appear, until everything is done. (even though if the bad guys call one in a story, there is ALWAYS one in shouting distance)... It's actually the same in the canon.. Very bad internal consistency.
DarkHunter10 chapter 6 . 3/8
Actually I pretty much disagree with the third on EVERY point made... Kakashi will NOT have "half the village breathing down his neck" when naruto's heritage is revealed (as probably should have been done by now)... The Ino-Shika-Cho WAS a good combo... BUT it was their FATHERS that were the great team, add in their fathers were a FAMOUS team, throughout the villages... SO wouldn't the other villages have had YEARS to set up defenses against THAT VERY TEAM? To recreate it, is just throwing raw meat to hungry sharks... The Aburame, Inzukia and Hyuuga might LOOK like a great recon team on paper, but that's ALL they are, there is no "heavy" for the team, so there is nothing AFTER scouting.. No "capture, destroy" etc... And nobody that could get them OUT.. Plus all their skills OVERLAP, not compliment... They all basically do the same thing. So yeah, ALL of what the third said? NOPE... Not if you think about it.
Guest chapter 5 . 3/8
No, there are negative side-effects for OTHER people... Not naruto... PROBABLY because of his uzumaki blood... I guess it COULD be from Minato's side and having unlimited room for intellectual growth after being STARVED for so long, but I'm leaning toward Uzumaki since they have "special" ill-defined chakra that's "different" then others.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/8
You know for a village that APPARENTLY only teaches HISTORY ad nauseam... Don't you find it odd... That SOMEHOW Uzu is left OUT? Considering THATS where the spiral for the bulk of the leaf's symbol is from... Mito Uzumaki being the wife of the FIRST and ANOTHER uzumaki being the wife of the FOURTH, seems like it would be in there too.. Also it SOMEHOW fell through the cracks that the uchiha have been betrayers over and over... (starting with madara)... If ALL they're going to teach, is just history OVER AND OVER... It seems odd that they'd leave these sorta things out... Even when the shinobi that are already there know these things and are SHOCKED naruto doesn't.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/8
Well HOW the village harms naruto is A LOT more believable in this one... It's even MORE believable that the blonde COULD have got help from the hokage, but he NEVER went to him with his academic problems (to be honest, how shocked the hokage was about mizuki and how BAD naruto was at school, kinda tells me, he was WAITING on naruto to do it, but naruto, due to how stubborn he is, never did.) It's ONE of the ways... His "pig-headedness" does work AGAINST him, sometimes being stubborn, is NOT a virtue. It can "get in the way" as much as it helps, sometimes.
Guest chapter 3 . 3/8
Actually, A really respected and LIKED minato... He was the one that got A and Bee to finally be brothers and A was very respectful of the man for that... So Kumo has NO PROBLEMS with Minato... And as for the "underworld"? Doesn't every single ninja have a BUNCH of enemies in the criminal underworld? So..What? No ninja should EVER have a kid? Because if they die.. Their kid is deep crap? Wonderful, so the leaf dies in a single generation. Yes Iwa MIGHT have a problem with naruto (but more then likely, NOT ESPECIALLY), Iwa has a "problem" with ALL konoha's people.. If they can't protect naruto, they can't protect ANY of the kids... That's just a statement of fact... ALL the kids of those that fought against them either ARE a target or ARE NOT a target... Kakashi killed bunches of them too and was minato's student, so if he has a kid, they will be targeted... So better keep them secret too, if he dies right? That is ESSENTIALLY the logic... and the "ninja villages" would be a thing of the past, because NOBODY would have kids. And retaliatory strikes would kill any that were accidentally created. (see it's KINDA dumb to hide naruto AT all... FINAL "nail in the coffin"?.. Everybody already KNOWS he's the kid.. LOOK AT HIM... Plus Itachi, and Orochi ALREADY KNOW! So basically keeping naruto's "secret" ONLY works ON THE VILLAGERS themselves.. Their enemies ALREADY KNOW)
DarkHunter10 chapter 3 . 3/8
With the kage bushin's secret of passing training on... (which an ANBU outta know, don't you think?) and naruto's chakra capacity... He can learn A LOT more then just a "taijutsu style" in a month. Learning, facts, jutsu, chakra control... ALL of it could EASILY be packed into a month, since he learns that fast too... Heck you can fit DECADES into a month.
my 2 guys chapter 38 . 1/24
that was great keep the chapters coming
Spirit Of The Black Wolf chapter 38 . 12/27/2022
Hell of a good story looking forward for the next update.
hitsdifferent chapter 29 . 12/15/2022
we want naruhinaaaa
hitsdifferent chapter 13 . 12/10/2022
hate this OOCness in naruto
kevinthegoat0304 chapter 8 . 12/4/2022
So he knows his heritage, but the sandiame doesn’t give him the gifts that we’re left behind by minato or Kushina?
kevinthegoat0304 chapter 7 . 12/4/2022
So your intentionally slowing Naruto’s progress down by not allowing him to spam clones…even though he can probably make 200 of them that last for hours.
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