Reviews for Inheritance
GoldenMouse7 chapter 3 . 5/20
Only on chapter 3 of 42 atm but loving the story so far. I myself am a fan of Yuugao and love to see her included! Looking forward to what comes next.
hilternico chapter 1 . 5/20
Yo bro love the story cant wait for next chapter
myafroatemydog chapter 18 . 5/11
Good chap chapter 40 . 5/11
Было, очень интересно читать, так же было немного грустно, жаль что вторая часть не дописана
myafroatemydog chapter 17 . 5/10
Lretty good chap
myafroatemydog chapter 12 . 5/10
Grwat chap
myafroatemydog chapter 11 . 5/10
Frear chap
myafroatemydog chapter 10 . 5/10
Great chap
myafroatemydog chapter 1 . 5/9
Pretty food chap
Spedyalarm chapter 2 . 5/6
Your fat ass doesn't know shit about writing fucking characters, and clearly you don't know shit about the actually canonical Naruto storyline. Naruto didn't even fucking know that Jiraiya was his godfather, until at the very least, after Jiraiya's death. Naruto had no fucking clue that Jiraiya did anything wrong in the first place.
You idiotic cunt.
Spedyalarm chapter 1 . 5/6
Hello, guest. I would like to politely ask you to shut the fuck up.
If you don't like the story, just stop reading it. And I KNOW your ass was the last 6 reviews or something, because all you did, was clearly go from one chapter to another just to hate on this writer, and then go to the latest chapters and hate on him there. If you don't like a story, give constructive criticism, and move on, don't stay around only to hate someone, idiotic fools like you have been the death of far too many aspiring author's. You don't even have a proper account, so clearly, you either don't have the balls to actually talk smack to this guy's face, or you are literally just here to be a bitch.
So, yeah, fuck off. Shut up, and go fuck yourself in the ass, and have a nice day.
Guest chapter 40 . 4/28
still dogshit
Guest chapter 36 . 4/28
this story is ass
Guest chapter 8 . 4/28
once again naruto forgiving jiraiya, makes no sense. jiraiya is no better than a parent that abanonded his child. you're a dogshit author, as was kishimoto. kys faggot
Guest chapter 6 . 4/28
jiraiya once again being an absent piece of shit. Naruto forgiving him in the main series made no sense, and it makes no sense here either. you're a fag, kys
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