|Reviews for The Dark Chronicles|
| cinhtay chapter 4 . 9/29/2017
Your firts version was good, this one is gorgeous supreme, much more plqusible, and i wish harry is the one to save with his grayness stuff, you know your last one was quite dark.
| happybunny688 chapter 4 . 7/6/2015
I loved the first, and am loving this one! I hope you continue!
| acetwolf94 chapter 4 . 11/13/2014
NICE! ADD MORE PLEASE!
| Aikaru chapter 4 . 5/25/2014
Will this story be continued? It has not been updated in years.
| Monkey Shoes chapter 4 . 10/27/2013
I usually don't like rewrites because they tend to be mainly the old story but you really streamlined this! It moves at a faster pace which is more enjoyable. Also I think the way you handled Harry's childhood was more realistic, I like the healer's characterization better, and the Potters are more nuanced - less cruel, more negligent, but still capable of familial warmth and understandably swayed from it. Really they alternative choices you made with the rewrite are better. I wish I could see how you might handle Harry under Voldemort and the elementals. Actually, I didn't mind the old story so much either, but I can see marked maturity in this plot, the writing almost makesthem two different stories - just from the tone. Also I really like Francis, maybe because he's such s docile character and fits into Harry's canon role so well but as far as HP OCs go (especially ones that 'replace' the boy who lived) I like him a lot
| Gracealma chapter 4 . 8/24/2013
This sounds like a good story. If the Dark Lord can truly love Harry then the dark and its followers have it made, and Harry will be what they want him to be.
| Chimebelle chapter 4 . 7/24/2013
Woah, woah woah, this is just... Terrible. Bringer of doom or not, how could they let that twisted man get their grips on a child? Really? Poor poor harry.
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/27/2013
As dark and gross your story is its actually really exciting!
Can't wait to see what happenes next!
| GOAWAYISAIDIQUITFANFICTION4EVA chapter 4 . 1/9/2013
Please update! :(
| Tom Riddle Addicted chapter 4 . 9/16/2012
are you still planning on updating this?
| 13AkiraKuranXIII chapter 4 . 9/7/2012
Brilliant. I wish you'd continued it.
| olciak123 chapter 4 . 8/18/2012
Disturbing yet interesting plot - I'd love to read more.
| DarkFlameInfernal chapter 4 . 4/20/2012
| Nikita Domolov chapter 4 . 3/1/2012
I like it though I also liked the last one this one is a bit darker than the other story but i love it all the same. I wonder if Harry will pop out of his shell after he meets voldy? Just wondering if mela an merric are going to appear again. Well I hoped that you kept some old ideas and a bunch of new ones too.
Please update soon (puppy dog eyes)
| Auga chapter 4 . 1/16/2012