Reviews for Primed
thump chapter 3 . 10/25/2010
best one ever so far...
KYTIVAFAN chapter 3 . 10/23/2010
You could write a whole story from this chapter. Really, really good. I could envision the characters actually having this conversation. I like your writing.
gsr4ever chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
LOVED this chapter. Can't wait to read more
tonyfan31970 chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
Really good!
Betherzz chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
really great chapter ;) cant wait to see what comes next for the dynamic duo in this series of 1 shots
M E Wofford chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
Ooh, yeah.

loved the argument.

Past time for it.

Loved the talking and coming to an understanding...of some kind.

And loved Gibbs orchestrating.

It really fit the explosive nature stories.
Ryalin chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
Enjoyed this new installment tremendously.
Seosh chapter 2 . 9/23/2010
haaha! it's good to see so many different stories come from this comment made by Shane Brennan.
Ink On Paper chapter 2 . 9/20/2010
Huge smile on my face.

Absolutely brilliant.

Bravo!
storm9449 chapter 2 . 9/20/2010
I love that Tony juggles a grenade.
Silvergrass chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
nice i like how it makes it read it in one breath in sort of. like building up. not letting go until the countdown end. it intensifies it too.
Ink On Paper chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Perfect.

Consider your venture into thematic writing a success.
Ryalin chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Loved this short but brilliant story the first time around. Loved it even more the second. Great job!
TwilightsDancer chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Love this! Angsty and awesome!