|Reviews for Primed|
| thump chapter 3 . 10/25/2010
best one ever so far...
| KYTIVAFAN chapter 3 . 10/23/2010
You could write a whole story from this chapter. Really, really good. I could envision the characters actually having this conversation. I like your writing.
| gsr4ever chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
LOVED this chapter. Can't wait to read more
| tonyfan31970 chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
| Betherzz chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
really great chapter ;) cant wait to see what comes next for the dynamic duo in this series of 1 shots
| M E Wofford chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
loved the argument.
Past time for it.
Loved the talking and coming to an understanding...of some kind.
And loved Gibbs orchestrating.
It really fit the explosive nature stories.
| Ryalin chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
Enjoyed this new installment tremendously.
| Seosh chapter 2 . 9/23/2010
haaha! it's good to see so many different stories come from this comment made by Shane Brennan.
| Ink On Paper chapter 2 . 9/20/2010
Huge smile on my face.
| storm9449 chapter 2 . 9/20/2010
I love that Tony juggles a grenade.
| Silvergrass chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
nice i like how it makes it read it in one breath in sort of. like building up. not letting go until the countdown end. it intensifies it too.
| Ink On Paper chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Consider your venture into thematic writing a success.
| Ryalin chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Loved this short but brilliant story the first time around. Loved it even more the second. Great job!
| TwilightsDancer chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Love this! Angsty and awesome!