Reviews for Puberty
papermetol chapter 4 . 4/10
good story and osom song
papermetol chapter 1 . 4/10
good story
Guest chapter 4 . 11/26/2016
Their are some spelling issues but I love this may you please continue this story I love the characters so much
Dragonheart15 chapter 4 . 11/22/2016
Great story I love it
scout chapter 1 . 3/31/2016
Wow well done
David demonix chapter 4 . 3/16/2016
I beg you on my knee to continu this fic! I juste canton wait to read the next chapter
David demonix chapter 4 . 3/16/2016
please continu this fic its Just so cute! Its one of the Best bioshock fanfic i have ever read!
LunarrOsi chapter 4 . 5/8/2015
Nooo WHERE'S THE FUCKING REST!
Wildwolfinvader chapter 4 . 3/20/2015
My name is Elena...
Yus
The-Artist-64 chapter 4 . 1/3/2015
I really loved this story! Not only was it romantic, it was also very well written.

Unfortunately, I am writing a story about an Alpha Series named Subject Theta, so there was some awkwardness for me at the end. XD

Anyways, this is simply fantastic.
Dreaming of Glory chapter 4 . 11/1/2014
F*cking love this one it explores a totally different area of BioShock love it
thewatcher509 chapter 2 . 7/11/2014
She *accepted* him, not "excepted".

Just trying to help, is all.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/14/2014
Omg more, MORE. Finish this story friend please!
Zeppelin Alice chapter 4 . 3/31/2014
Great story so far, you over used the ''the alpha model series'', though... But now that they have names I hope that will change. Looking forward for more ;)

- I do see you have not updated in a while, but I'm giving this fic a chance.
The Heartless Direwolf chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
Now do you see how many people want you to continue this story?! A ton! Please keep this going!
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