Reviews for Master of D'Hara
eagle219406 chapter 9 . 3/31/2011
I read the story up to here. I don't know if you even read these anymore, but There is one problem. Now the story is well written including this chapter, but I can't help feeling like you skipped a chapter. I mean one minute Shota is telling them she had a vision, the next Kahlan and Richard are in Aydendril and a couple of days have passed. Was that Deliberate?
Minagi Soryu chapter 14 . 10/6/2010
Too perfect! I love the way you write! Nicci is my favorite character, though I really like the Dude.

"... That Was nothing hasn't Already Been done" *.*

I like the way everything is going perfectly marrying the book and the series. how has everything est''a OC and consistent and an excellent context.

I loved especially the part that Tapio Nicci Rahl!

keep writing

Kisses! bjos!
ForeverRK chapter 16 . 10/5/2010
firelight3000 chapter 16 . 10/4/2010
nooooo,you can't end it there! It's like a major cliffhanger, well semi major, but still. Can't wait for the sequel :)
NinjaSheik chapter 13 . 9/30/2010
I totally hate Rahl in this chapter! What a...jerk!

firelight3000 chapter 11 . 9/28/2010
wow this is tense, Kahlan pregnant, Richard captured and Cara injured. This couldn't get more nerve wraking! Can't wait to read more
MontyPythonFan chapter 9 . 9/28/2010
Love love LOVE this fic :-D

3 updates in a row. Loving it.

NinjaSheik chapter 8 . 9/27/2010
Cool~! Update soon~!
Lara chapter 8 . 9/27/2010
Absolutley Great! Love it!
MontyPythonFan chapter 6 . 9/27/2010
.God that was insanely tense dude! :-D

LOVED it. Bring on freedom!


islanzadi1995 chapter 3 . 9/23/2010
OOOO mystery
islanzadi1995 chapter 2 . 9/20/2010
and walked away...wonder what happens next.