Reviews for Harry Potter and the Turning of the Sun
Devilking1994 chapter 10 . 7/9
Why does he keep saying the names of people that he shouldn't know in this time ? Is he incapable of speaking in his head instead of aloud?
Devilking1994 chapter 9 . 7/9
That meeting with Lily was not Fiery it was more Meh
Devilking1994 chapter 6 . 7/9
Please don't tell me Harry took Divination in this story when he went to the past surely he would take the opportunity to actually learn something useful
Devilking1994 chapter 4 . 7/9
That's so silly Harry is in the past to chance things I don't see any reason for Harry not to remain a Potter and meet his Fathers parents him becoming a Dumbledore is just cringe
Devilking1994 chapter 2 . 7/9
God that's cringe yeah lets send Harry back in time but not tell him that is what is going to happen it's just silly

I hope that Harry ends up living with James Parents Harry deserves to meet his Grandparents
Guest chapter 6 . 7/4
I thought Harry’s name was Arnold
Sayanka Betal chapter 28 . 6/22
I can respect Sirius but never Andromeda. Also while I don't support pureblood ideology as I grew older I realised that i didn't when as a kid I watched the movies. Muggles can never accept wizards and with tech someday they may discover them which will be very bad for wizards so i feel it's pretty dumb for wizards who want to coexist with muggles and even more those who marry them since they have such a short lifespan. Grindelwald was right in his ideology even though radical in his methods to implement them.
snow in the darkness chapter 38 . 6/8
I like the character consistency of Bellatrix. Pragmatist and cunning, and she never leave that attitude
snow in the darkness chapter 36 . 6/8
Bellatrix Dumbledore. I'm sure that will be the best torture for Bellatrix Lestrange in Azkaban
snow in the darkness chapter 34 . 6/8
from my experience in harry potter fanfic sections. Favs indicator is really not the best indicator for good fanfic. You just proved that to me. Good work
snow in the darkness chapter 33 . 6/8
what's funny is Andromeda marry muggleborn, Bella marry halfblood and Narcissa marry pureblood. Collections indeed. The Dumbledore name in Harry always kind of hilarious to me, especially when many always call Harry "Dumbledore" rather than "Potter"
snow in the darkness chapter 31 . 6/8
this fanfic is actually in my opinion the most realistic and the best written romance fanfic that focused on Bella and Harry. Most of other story always show that either Arcturus is a not a good man but a grandfather that loves his family or blacks that finally support their relationship through effort or Harry that is so OP, but let's not kidding ourselves, Harry Potter is a mature boy but never a fully adult, he have his flaw and love is always going to be our greatest strength and flaw, if we talk about canon if there is that kind of thing there's gotta be other family that reach out to Sirius other than Alphard or Andromeda. Blacks family as a whole is always a bigoted, Toujours Pur is their family motto and how do you think Walburga can have so much power without any interference. It's not an easy choice, it's never an easy one when all your life you only know that earth is flat, and suddenly someone come to your life and told earth is round
laloudu77 chapter 31 . 6/1
I have some troubles finding Bella and Harry together believable, especially when there is no really deep development regarding Harry’s feelings, but I’ll keep on reading nonetheless, to see how it ends.
laloudu77 chapter 31 . 6/1
I don’t really see the point of talking about 2 possible Merlin. And I also don’t understand the difference btw the 2…
reader chapter 17 . 5/17
please make harry op please
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