Reviews for Harry Potter and the Turning of the Sun
noondark chapter 10 . 8/17
I believe you had actually mentioned earlier in the story that Dumbeldore left Harry his penseive with memories for him. Which he has somehow still not watched at this point. I do not really understand how this Harry can have such a visceral hate for these “young” Death Eaters and also managed to lose his motivation to improve and fight Voldemort once he traveled back in time with the express goal of doing so.
vlas281294 chapter 3 . 3/23
This is such a useless and incompetent Harry that the canon Harry looks like a super successful Protagonist against his background. In short, this Harry is a spineless patient whom everyone mocks, and although at Hogwarts, even in the original stories, he somehow defended his dignity. In general, I do not advise you to waste your time on this story.
santos.luis.contato chapter 26 . 3/16
this is the most fucking bulshit i had ever heard... Doesnt matter that he is his father... He just gave him he personal spell and James just "pay" him having a quiditch play? bulshit... First of all, I wouldnt teach him that, doesnt matter that he is my father...
santos.luis.contato chapter 17 . 3/16
aas I said a few chapters before... This Harry is so much a disapointment... he is so fk weak...
santos.luis.contato chapter 12 . 3/16
I'm not gonna lie... I was hopping a better Harry... This Harry is so pathetic... He doesnt even is like the Harry that fought at the ministry against the death eaters... He is weak...
santos.luis.contato chapter 11 . 3/15
I dont know if this is Canon or not, but Alice's name is Alice Fortescue and not Prince... I know for sure that its not Prince...
Diametrik chapter 14 . 3/1
Oh no, this chapter reminded me which fic this is. It's the one where Harry spends a month purposefully going out of his way to make the stupefy spell worse and then gets reverse plot armour in his duel.

I remember liking it for the most part despite that irritation, though, so I'll push through and keep reading.
Diametrik chapter 11 . 2/28
Isn't Greta a fifth-year? Why's she learning how to apparate?
Diametrik chapter 10 . 2/27
I wonder why he would get another pensieve when Dumbledore already gave him one. I'd also think that they'd be pretty damn expensive
Diametrik chapter 4 . 2/26
[He was standing alone in the mirror, older and more powerful, and back to his normal black hair color and normal green eyes, with Voldemort destroyed and gone from the world, his evil extinguished.]
How do you show that last part in a mirror?
Diametrik chapter 3 . 2/26
["I can't go back, can I?" Harry abruptly questioned the older wizard, though he somehow already knew the answer. Throughout his limited time in the wizarding world, he had never heard of a Time-Turner sending someone forward through time, only backwards, and he figured this would be the same principle as that.
"Not that I am aware of, no, I'm sorry." Dumbledore answered once again, giving Harry a small, sad smile, hoping to ease the pain. Time was funny like that: you could go back, but not forward since the future wasn't written and was therefore too fluid to safely travel to.]

This really shouldn't be that difficult to accomplish for someone like Dumbledore. There's no need to "send him forwards in time", just put him in some kind of stasis and then take him out when enough time has passed, like Fry from Futurama.
Lord M. Antares Grindelwald chapter 1 . 2/6
I have read two chapters and I already hate this story! "Your physical security takes precedence over your mental health", you really have to be a shit to get this kind of bullshit out of a 16-year-old teenager who has just lost important people in his life! And Remus I never liked him so thank you again for this fic where I will hate him a little more!
perlcat45 chapter 39 . 12/13/2022
Great story! I hope one day you continue with it.
Bella chapter 21 . 12/2/2022
This story is Shit.
Bella chapter 20 . 12/2/2022
I hate seeing a great Plotline being wasted like this.
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