|Reviews for YULETIDE CANTICLE|
| amymorgan chapter 7 . 12/16/2011
Hands down, favorite paragraph:
Charlie had been mulling over something all night, and Bella could see it in the deliberate way he chewed on the edges of his mustache, all the while regarding Edward like he was arrested, guilty, and about to be interrogated until he broke. He finally got what he'd wanted to say to Edward right in his head and fired away.
Love that Charlie (and the perfect film casting)!
| Thata chapter 7 . 12/16/2011
Hi there, girl!
I've found your fic through Fictionator's Teaser Monday and it's really amazing!
I loved the drama of the plot and how dark Edward was before Bella; how conflicted he became once she was in his life and how cute and protective he was once he realized he was in love with her!
I loved Bella's strong mind, even though she is terminally sick and have accepted she'll die soon, and her will to live every day and make the best of it!
Alice is enchanting without being too nosy or demanding that others do what she says and wish; in spite of their small part so far, it's possible to see that Emmet seems nice, funny and brotherly, while Rose isn't too bitchy. I like it, a LOT!
I loved Bella's condition and all the possibilities for their future, especially with the wolves lurking around the corner, unsuspecting what's going on below their noses.
How many chapters do you have planned for this story?
I hope that we have many others left to read, because I just felt in love with your writing and plot!
I simply can't wait for the next chapter!
I hope I can read it before Christmas!
Once again, congratulations on your fic!
Kisses from Brazil!
Thais (AKA Thata)
| ellarose85 chapter 7 . 12/16/2011
Please tell me this has a happy ending. I've seen many stories lines similar to yours and they all ended ...bad. I just wish someone will say: screw canon and Ed decides to turn Bella even without her will. Come on, shes as good as dead...why hold back? I don't get it some times.
Anywho...great story and i'm enjoying it so far.
| lgmrkm chapter 7 . 12/15/2011
So glad your back, great chap. I hope a new chap comes soon :D it could be your christmas gift to moi ;) hehe
| FeathersEverywhere chapter 7 . 12/15/2011
That was so sweet. I can't wait to see how this all plays out.
| kmfroggi chapter 7 . 12/15/2011
gotta love good ole charlie! great meeting the family!
| timidvampire chapter 7 . 12/15/2011
just got into this story, and I love it x
| Soni's Angel chapter 7 . 12/15/2011
What an awesome chapter update! Edward sure is getting more besotted with his little human by the day. I love how honest he was with Charlie about his feelings for Bella and his family's acceptance toward Bella was so precious;P Can't wait to read more;) HAPPY HOLIDAYS TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY;)
| DutchGirl01 chapter 7 . 12/15/2011
Absolutely adored this chapter, great work!
| katmom chapter 7 . 12/15/2011
OH...what a lovely Christmas for them ALL!
Yes, please, send me the link to your published bits!
| edwardbabymomma chapter 7 . 12/14/2011
| LibraryLady08 chapter 7 . 12/14/2011
Happy Christmas! :)
| cbcullen7 chapter 7 . 12/14/2011
Great chapter! I loved Edward's speech to Charlie there at the end, he is so sweet. They said their "I Love Yous" YAY! Can't wait for more. Till next time...
| cullengirl08 chapter 7 . 12/14/2011
As horribly direct as Charlie was with that statement, I loved Edward's emotional and heartfelt response. He really loves Bella with everything he has and I think with that statement, he finally made a believer out of Charlie.
| Beans827 chapter 7 . 12/14/2011
Ahhh, that was lovely! Very nice chapter. So, is Edward not thinking of turning her at all? Have they talked about that at all? I think that needs to discussed pretty soon in case her heart starts to fail or something. Having a terminal illness would be a very good excuse to become a vampire! Great stuff. Love it.