Reviews for The Breaking of a Girl
The Terrible Jester chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
lastofthecrimelords chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
I thought this was absolutely perfect. Beautiful, inspiring...basically the way I'd love to write if I had the imagination and the ability. Please write more stream-of-consciousness like this! Please? For me? Pleeaasse?
Bagge chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
A fine portrait of the mind of Luna Lovegood. Well handled stream of conciousness and well composed story. I really like the repeated "they don't understand" with the last stinger - "This, they think they know why"