Reviews for Broken Open
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
Wow just wow
Tuppence chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
*squick* Why can't they show more scenes like these in the show? Bring more brotherly love in all it's schmoopy glory.

I loved it. Absolutely loved it. The disjointed nature of Dean's thought, mimicking how his fever might make him think and hell probably did too...it was wonderful.

And the ending? With Sam taking his pain away? That was just wonderful. Absolutly loved this.

~ Trina ~
Sci F.I. Warper chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
GAH! Way to tear a new one in the ol' heartstrings. This was just sad, and painful to read but had the best ending ever! Love the quick narrative style. I almost want to see this as a full story. But I think you captured the essence of the brothers in a few short paragraphs.
rog457 chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
"Shh…You're safe, you're safe, don't cry."

Takes the pain, holds him close, keeps him safe.

"I got you, Dean."

"Sammy…"

The true essence of the Winchesters relationship, they keep each other safe.

Loved the style on this one, short bursts of emotion.
Vanessa Sgroi chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
Aw. I liked this. Very touching.
Dizzo chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
Really love Sammy coming to the rescue, poor desperate Dean

Thank you x
MeAzrael chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
Awww. Loved your writing style - really intense, very expressive. "God... No, no God here." Heart breaking desperation...

xxx Kate
Edina Clouds chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
ooh Chloe - what a treat! thanks so much for this great birthday drabble. Very nicely written - lovely imagery!

Viv

x
Enkidu07 chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Very sweet and raw and open. Great staccato touch. I am in. I love Sam telling him not to cry.
Dynetyven chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
aw how sweet, one just wanna hug both, and make Dean feel better.
Melalucci chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Awww...so sweet.
IWannaLiveInABigBlueBox chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
you kill me with these stories. i love them so much! ahh i feel like crying now!
88Ivories chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Oh Dean! I liked.
sammygirl1963 chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
All those two ever need to feel safe is their sibling!