Reviews for In the Light Of the Stars
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 13 . 12/18/2014
Nothing less than expected. A top-notch finish.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 12 . 12/18/2014
It was light on Minevra, but it's all about quality, not quantity and you weren't short on that!
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 11 . 12/18/2014
Amazing.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 10 . 12/18/2014
This was a wonderful example of writing.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 9 . 12/18/2014
This was very well-written.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 8 . 12/18/2014
There was some top-notch dialogue in this chapter. I like that you tried to put in some mother tongues. However, I think your Gaelic is a little off. "Tá sé sin go hiontach" is a better translation of that's terrific. Also, "Táim in grá leat." is a much better translation of I love you. The literal translation of what you said is something like "I have a relationship with you." Irish is not my first language as I don't live in a Gaeltacht area. English is my first language. However, I am an Irish teen, living in the middle of Ireland. I've been learning Irish since I started school aged 5 (over 12 years ago). I'm in secondary school now and I do it as an Honours subject. My marks aren't bad and the words you chose were fairly basic, so rest assured, you can trust that my translations are accurate.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 7 . 12/18/2014
Cool.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 6 . 12/18/2014
This was a realistic portrayal of war-time. Good job!
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 5 . 12/18/2014
Very interesting indeed...
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 4 . 12/18/2014
:)
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 3 . 12/18/2014
That Scottish accent... I love it!
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 2 . 12/18/2014
You're v. good at choosing fitting titles.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 1 . 12/18/2014
A lovely start. I quite like the nickname Gussie.
lizzywizzy1976 chapter 13 . 8/1/2014
I hope you are still writing i really miss the updates
JC chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
Come baaacck! So many cliffhangers with so many stories.
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