Reviews for Gone
emo n proud chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
are u kidding I nearly cried :) u should keep going then make it after he left she some how came back to life
Lady Blackwater chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
"Don't come closer, selfish frigid bitch." That is my favorite line in this story. Leah would be so proud of Jake...yknow if she were :D this story was good I was crying nicely written :)
lexx26 chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
I love the story so far I was hoping u can add to ths story finally someone is mad at bella and I want to see what happens next
Dark Latinas chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
wow. that was... wow. good job.
Sand Princess chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
Oh my god, why'd you have you go and kill Leah, it was so sad!

But I loved the way you presented the story though.

Good job, I wanna read more from you
brokencrownsandhearts chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
this was amazing! i never liked Bella so i love the way you have Jake get angry at her and this was just amazing!
Bamabelle1991 chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
it's intense enough to make me cry! Really!
maying38 chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
I love it. It is sad and heart-breaking of course but it was very well-written. The fact that Jacob called Bella a beyotch helped too :D Oooh you should write another story featuring Jake & Leah plus Edward befriending Leah. Edward could still end with Bella but he is not blind to her flaws. Meyer created some interesting characters but she didn't know what to do with them.
tseena-true chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Loved it, this was amazing!
brankel1 chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Very great job.
o0FLAM3S0o chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Love it