|Reviews for And We All Fall Down|
| CharmingNotDarling chapter 3 . 10/30/2010
Wow. That was amazing! That was better than it could every be on tv:) I so so loved this!
| Ilmare-Ilse chapter 3 . 10/26/2010
Hey, I'm a big fan of your stories, and I love how you write the characters and their interactions, but something that bugs me about this particular story is the fact that in my opinion, once there has been violence in a relationship, a simple apology does not really solve the problem.
I understand that you are portraying passionate and angry characters, but to go from that to violence... It just bugged me, and while I'm old enough to realize that you're just telling a tale, some other readers may be younger and not see it as just fantasy, and justify violence because the other was angry or stressed, or whatever...
I'm sorry if I sound preachy, or if my comments are an inconvenience. I'd hope to get your take on the issue, but of course you're free to ignore me anyways...
I'm still hoping to see more stories from you...
See you around
| Viktorija chapter 3 . 10/8/2010
I loved it! :)
| Betherzz chapter 3 . 10/6/2010
good way to end this one ;)
| petuniatc chapter 3 . 10/6/2010
Excellent! And no you didn't leave us hanging, you just left it open for what happens next.
| Schmaltzy chapter 3 . 10/6/2010
Really great story, and a lesson there for them both ;).
| I am the girl in the corner chapter 3 . 10/5/2010
awww! oh my gosh that was so good. the mcgee thing was a nice touch. i loved all the little things in italics. amazing job keep up the good work. :D :D :D
| tonyfan31970 chapter 3 . 10/5/2010
This was so sweet! I love it.
| Seosh chapter 3 . 10/5/2010
Oh. My. God. I loooveee it! Now I'm going to go back and read it again lol.
| Sophie Ranier chapter 3 . 10/5/2010
ohmygod this was utterly fantastic!
and the ending was perfection
one of your best stories yet! love your use of imagery and detail:D
| alexcullen1 chapter 3 . 10/5/2010
aw! so good and sad! made my night with a little Tiva!
| Mooncombo chapter 3 . 10/5/2010
"What's scarier, though, is that it's never his life flashing before his eyes –and it hasn't been, for quite some time. What's scary, he decides, is that it's always his life without her that he sees."
Okay, so now THIS is my favorite line ever.
Another wonderful story by you. Thank you!
| BamonTivaLove chapter 3 . 10/5/2010
SO AMAZING! As usual
| Mooncombo chapter 2 . 10/5/2010
"He doesn't want to get involved, has no desire to play mediator. But if Tony's got an ugly bruise, then they've really gotten into it, their verbal sparring mutating into violence, and frankly, the caseload just can't allow for Ziva to kill DiNozzo."
This is one of my most favorite passges EVER.
"And he doesn't know what it is that possesses him –and probably never will- but he's got Ziva flipped over, pinned beneath his body before he even realizes he's moved to shield her."
Great chapter...on to the next!
| gsr4ever chapter 3 . 10/5/2010
This was really great. I liked it a lot