|Reviews for My lovely|
| viruscaptor chapter 1 . 9/3/2014
| xxBowlOfSugarxx chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
hot hot hot! /
| meisu chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
Umm.. I really don't want to ask, but is this a joke? It says on your profile that you're from the US, so it can't be possible that you are THIS bad at your own language.. Right?
| Kaia-Rhea chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
I know you said to 'not give you shit', but reviews ARE for giving crit as well as praise, and... Well this is atrocious spelling and grammar wise.
Ever hear of punctuation and capital letters? Because if you want to improve at all and receive positive reivews, then you need to start using them.
If you aren't sure how to spell a word, then look in a dictionary, or download Microsoft Word or Open Office so that it can check for mistakes as you work.
Having one or two typos is perfectly understandable... But I could barely read all the way through this- the grammar makes it harder to.
Good luck with improving.
| Prinnsessanie chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
maybe you should learn to spell a little better before writing a sex-scene...