Reviews for Right Choice
Eleanor chapter 3 . 8/8
I tried. I tried getting through it. But that little girl is NOT a little girl. You're writing her more like a teenager or even an adult and I just can't get through it. This could be a good fic, but you have got to fix your character's age. Either write her more like a child or change her age.
Eleanor chapter 3 . 8/8
I'm sorry, but Michelle is WAY too articulate for a five year old. You clearly haven't been around children her age much. She speaks like an adult and it's very distracting and takes away from the plot.
marthapreston4 chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
This is the most articulate 5 your old I have ever seen. This kids doesnt talk like a child kinda makes the character strange
Gemini girl 96 chapter 9 . 4/26/2013
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loveinuyashatoshiro chapter 9 . 11/23/2012
i love it it's really great
Starman800 chapter 9 . 9/2/2012
Very nice story. Liked how vance got involved as well.
Gottahavemyncis chapter 9 . 11/13/2011
Loved the story - love Tim as Daddy! Is there a sequel...I'll go look.
9foxgrl chapter 7 . 9/24/2011
I'm hooked, Daddy McGee!

And Jethro guarding Michelle like she his puppy is so cute!
starjems88 chapter 9 . 1/6/2011
Loved it:)
MissAdorable96 chapter 9 . 1/5/2011
I loved this story!
Danielle chapter 4 . 1/5/2011
Awwwwwww! I like what Tony said about the present... D
SpecialAgentMcTim-SpenceReid chapter 9 . 1/5/2011
I'm on my phone, and it's difficult to sign in.

I LOVED this! Absolutely adored it.

Can't wait to read more from you. D
MMWillow13 chapter 9 . 1/4/2011
nice ending, but I hope there's a sequel
MMWillow13 chapter 8 . 1/2/2011
Save the baby ... right now save her. Gibbs you should know better.
Snowspell chapter 8 . 1/2/2011
Yea! You posted! I've been reading your story and it's very good. I love the characterization and can't wait to find out the hidden story behind the threats to Michelle. I love McGee as a daddy. Post again soon! I'm on pins and needles to get Michelle back and catch the bad guy.
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