|Reviews for The Never Ending Road|
| ElectricLimeGreen chapter 13 . 12/18/2013
I really enjoyed your story. Thank you!
| Moonlight Cosmic Angel chapter 13 . 11/30/2013
it was a good story
i dont think you should make it romantic if you did write a jake/leah story because if one of them imprinted the other would just be heartbroken all over again
| Moonlight Cosmic Angel chapter 2 . 11/30/2013
i laughed when she told billy and sam that it looked like billy and how billy couldnt look at her afterwards lol
| loventherussian17 chapter 13 . 8/12/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
| HLPotter chapter 13 . 7/5/2013
I love it
| vampiregirl31 chapter 13 . 5/28/2013
awww so omg i love it
| Bell 1 chapter 13 . 4/24/2013
I really enjoyed this story. The uniqueness of Ephraim being still alive and imprinted to Bella. Even Bella's dreams, or memories as Diana. I do feel bad for Jacob though. I hope he finally finds love.
There is one thing that bothers me. Ephraim didn't seem to see Bella. It seemed like he only saw and had eyes for his first love, Diana. Bella seems happy enough, but had that been me, I would have felt as though I didn't matter, even though it was my body and my life that Diana was invading. It seemed as though it was an Ephraim and Diana love story rather than Ephraim and Bella because we didn't get anything that suggested Ephraim really saw Bella, not even when he gave her the necklace again. He did say he knew she wasn't ready yet, but he was still seeing her as Diana when he gave it to her. Even Bella seemed to let Diana mostly lead the way and took the backseat once she saw Ephraim.
That being said, I am going to assume (based on the timing) that Ephraim go to know Bella, as she did him, during the first six months and that is why it took them some time to "bond together".
Other than that feeling, it was really an enjoyable read and not something I have read before in this fandom. Thank you so very much for sharing your story. :D
| ptl4ever419 chapter 13 . 3/4/2013
| An Avid Reader Forever chapter 13 . 1/20/2013
love this story.
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/19/2012
Just amazing. I would never of thought to write a story like this. Well donr in interpreting so many twilight characters!
| an angel's whisper chapter 13 . 11/16/2012
loved it !
| yuiop chapter 13 . 11/5/2012
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