Reviews for Bulletproof
Victor Weiss chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
Ray is once again in character to near perfection there is only one thing that caught me that was off about the story was the how it lacked a second, third and fourth chapter to read!

The beginning is good, very good as expected.

The first ending is also good, Ray was in character and it was touching.

The second ending was...sad, very touching, brought a tear to my eye.

And the third ending was also good, nice use of the expensive healing techniques they need for SPARTANs, very good.