|Reviews for What Readers Hate|
| noeru chapter 11 . 3/29
Hey, I think, this fanfiction/guide/something is a good idea. I mainly agree with you, but I also have something to ask.
I know, everybody got his/her opinion about Tadase and not many people who watched/read Shugo Chara like him,but why you have to call him also like all this stupid fangirls "Tadagay"? I don't know your opinion about him, but exactly using this word shows how stupid a author is. It's only insulting and the way these peolpe use it, it's homophob. So, if you are intelligent, don't use it.
PS: I understand if some people don't like him that much, or if they can't act with homosexuals. But using "gay" as a insult, that's only stupid! So please stop using "Tadagay".
| Otaku Neko Ninja Miko Tenshi chapter 11 . 3/25
HAHA, I love this series! Very entertaining, with underlining purpose :3
| Bunny Unnie chapter 7 . 4/13/2013
I so agree with problem C. I'm Chinese so it's so damn annoying when people just go and try to say something "Chinese" like. "Ching-chong, chaaannng!" "OHHH! NI HAO!" Annoying. Idiots and their stupidity. I might of lost brain cells from them.
| Wintress chapter 5 . 6/27/2012
AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH! Wall text! Lol.
Please tell me the very scary ones, lol. I like to be scared. 8D
| Wintress chapter 3 . 6/27/2012
"THERE'S A DIFFERENCE BETWEEN ITS AND IT'S!"
Yep. So true. When using an incorrect term in a touching part of a fanfic it totally ruins it
| Wintress chapter 2 . 6/27/2012
Hi, I would like you to know that I was x-kATSUMI. I found my old fic and I now realize that..is NOT a parody. Seriously. And you have every right to be scared.
Great fic, as I remember.
| XxRaindr0pxX chapter 6 . 6/24/2012
Lol, I love this chapter. It was ironic and funny and amusing and I laughed out loud at the part wehre your saying:
Google some famous quotes and tweak them a little for Dia.
Lol! I totally agree and the bit about the shugo charas coming out from random flower pots is also true.
I mean, do they just hide out behind objects and wait to be called or come out just at the exact time?
| XxRaindr0pxX chapter 5 . 6/24/2012
Yes I wholeheartedly agree with this chapter and it's a better one then your last chapter.
It's funny and humurous and yet I get the point your trying to express, and I loved the bit where the students are teasing the teacher about her sanity.
| XxRaindr0pxX chapter 4 . 6/24/2012
Hmm...I'm sorry to say this, but this is by far one of the worst chapters I've ever read of yours. Okay 1, who is Lychee547? I seem to have forgotton that character, and the random numbers and time at the end of each character's name is just confusing and it would be better to just go without.
I didn't finish reading this chapter because it was off-putting and poorly formatted, sorry about that.
Plus, I couldn't find the bit where you got started on your points so I kind of gave up reading...
| XxRaindr0pxX chapter 3 . 6/24/2012
I liked this chapter, though the first paragraph was really confusing. And I agree about your 4th point. How annoying is it when this is the conversation between two characters: (made up conversation as an example btw)
"Shugo chara! Transfrom!" Yelled Amu Chan, as she transformed. "You think you can beat me?" Snickered Utau, "Eli-transform!" "Oh no you don't Utau!" "You think you can stop me?" "Yes I do!"
See how hard it is the distinguish the two people talking? Yeah okay, enough about me ranting (lol), I'll continue reading now :)
| XxRaindr0pxX chapter 2 . 6/24/2012
Wow, this guide is actually realistic and funny too. I love how you grasp onto the main facts and you reword them into funny and witty comments.
I think there's nothing wrong with this story, however in some bits your writing seems hesitant. Don't be hesitant in writing critisim, because you write it well and I can't wait to read the rest of the chapters!
P.S. I wholeheartedly agree with the 'new shugo chara' person, I've read several of these stories myself and most are of poor grammer, punctuation and are just weaker plasgerised versions of the original shugo chara.
| ScarstarOfMountainClan chapter 11 . 3/15/2012
I love this story :DDD Yeah, most of these things annoy me too. Ugh, but all the Tadase bashing annoyed me, even if it was just in the story.
And I agree with Miru...I used to ship it but now...meh. I don't really ship ahy chara couples...
I loved the self-insert chapter, because I have a self-insert story...but that's ''Random Fangirl Ruins Things'' where I burst in on the Guardians and freak out when I see them...
Please update soon :D
| Random chara chapter 11 . 1/22/2012
Thank You! Finally, a fanfic to save us from all the other poiuntless, worthless, unnesesary, mary-sue, terrible, badly written, rediculous, (ect.) boring . . . . things! (So called stories)
| lookintomyeyes' red ink chapter 11 . 11/20/2011
Here are some things that really annoy me:
- Grouping the whole chapter into one HUGE paragraph.
- Including events that are not related to one another in one paragraph.
You can include these in your fic if you want to.
| lookintomyeyes' red ink chapter 4 . 11/20/2011
"i hope you update soon, because the readers are probably DYING to find out what happens even though theyre probably not, but im going tto say that anyways to sound dramatic!"
You might've done it on purpose, but there are errors in this.
"Theyre" should be they're. "im" should be I'm. 'To' is spelled with one 't'. The comma before "because" is not necessary when the complex sentence is structured that way.