|Reviews for Door of Dread|
| JimChou chapter 9 . 6/7
Heart-warming ending and satisfying, considering what an early fic this is. But I missed an epilog of sorts to wrap it all neatly up, address all the issues you brought up and give us some nice comfort between our heroes...
| JimChou chapter 8 . 6/7
You're so lucky to have been able to get a feeling of the WC filming in NY! At that time I didn't even know about the show...
It's good to read this fic now (don't know how I missed this story so far) and feel again the special atmosphere of the early seasons. I love how you portray Neal as sensitive and smart, Peter as caring and strong but also discouraged at times (who wouldn't be?). Your rendition of them is close to the show; great!
| JimChou chapter 5 . 6/7
Wel,l we suffer with Peter and Neal and it's nice to see them both so close and strong through their ordeal. Now I can see how people hate O'Reilly for what he does to Peter but I'm nonetheless appalled at what he himself has been put through in prison. And I don't understand why the abused inmates (who admittedly have killed some evil guards in Marion...) are now in solitary (for ever?) in such gruesome conditions in the new prison. It's no wonder O'Reilly has gone insane. Aren't there some organizations who look into that kind of things in the US?
Don't take it as a bad critic; I'm not defending the bad guy; he is wrong and shouldn't see Peter in the same way as the guards but he doesn't seem to act yotally out of the blue.
| Phoenix-cry chapter 9 . 3/26/2015
warm fuzzy ending. ;)
| Phoenix-cry chapter 8 . 3/26/2015
Alright, I take it back about Johnson...begrudgingly.
| Phoenix-cry chapter 7 . 3/26/2015
Well at least Johnson...hmmmm...no...he's scum.
| Phoenix-cry chapter 6 . 3/26/2015
I like the derelict building setting, it works well here.
| Phoenix-cry chapter 5 . 3/26/2015
O'Reilly is proper insane...
| Phoenix-cry chapter 4 . 3/26/2015
Charles Atlas! Awesome reference.
| Phoenix-cry chapter 3 . 3/26/2015
Can't fault Neal's loyalty. ;)
| Phoenix-cry chapter 2 . 3/26/2015
You have great Neal/Peter banter even when they are in a tough spot. Poor Peter though...he's already nearly dead!
| Phoenix-cry chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
Yowza...tight spot already! You could have turned this first chapter into like ten. heehee. But then again sometimes jumping right into the action rather than focusing on the background can be fun too.
Perhaps Johnson can be an ally?
| mouse8 chapter 9 . 12/9/2012
Great story, suspenseful and well-written. I especially loved the last line!
| wotumba1 chapter 9 . 11/14/2012
| wotumba1 chapter 7 . 11/14/2012
so his only hope is - again - neal! hope he'll make it!