Reviews for As Dense as a Cloud
MakoRain chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
hehe poor Cloud but he is dense and this is a cute way of showing it :) good idea! *tips hat* and now onto the next chapter...


*meant to be*
Kitten of Edo chapter 8 . 9/21/2011
awesome! honestly i don't remember what i suggested i was about readdy to pass out when i reviewed! XD
Iris Irine chapter 8 . 9/21/2011
Lol if this happens in real life, I'd be confused whether I should laugh or cry :P
NoraSpider-Girl chapter 8 . 9/20/2011
OH, Cloud! He is the only person that could make flowers and chocolates turn out to badly! How does he manage to screw up the smallest of things!

Keep going with this, I am an avid Cloud/Tifa fangirl!
NoraSpider-Girl chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
That first chapter was SO funny! Now for the next one...
Kitten of Edo chapter 7 . 9/1/2011
haha! hilarious could you make one where cloud isn't so dense i mean dense but not, get it? that would be awesome~
james78 chapter 7 . 8/31/2011
fantastic story

perhaps a good one would be one set a cid and shera's wedding or cid's batcherlor party poor dense cloud probably would survive
KarDs chapter 5 . 7/27/2011
God, how I love Zack. Cloud and him are the same.

Very good work :)
KarDs chapter 3 . 7/27/2011
Good god! I was laughing so hard! I LOVE a dense cloud. Its soooooo cute and adorable. Im always on a hunt for those stories!

Your style of writing is super. Thanks a lot for this FF!
xXgoodbyeXx chapter 5 . 5/27/2011
LOL! These were hilarious! My favorites were Chapter 1 and Chapter 3! Those ones really cracked me up! :)
MalikaiDragonSlayer chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
LOL What kind of cloud is Cloud this is such a great idea I wish I would've thought about it I guess you probably but it to better use than me
AagwaMiyusu chapter 5 . 1/3/2011

How much more dense can our beloved Spikey become?

GAWD! Tifa's birthday sure was a blast! LOLOL, and Yuffie! Hope you enjoy the training! lollxxx
annonomous chapter 5 . 11/19/2010
This was soooooo good! I loved it! The should have put a scene like this in Advent Children! I love how you update so regularly too. Everyone's been totally in character as well! Please keep writing this story! Vincent is my favorute character, so could you please write something about him... that maybe involved Cloud and all the silly things that could go wrong at a rifle range if one is ditzy enough mabey? ;D
SalemTheMuffin chapter 5 . 11/14/2010
Aw, poor Cloud fails on a daily basis. xD I luv this, keep going. :D
ffangelwing chapter 4 . 11/7/2010
Jajaja very funny, again great chapter 8D
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