|Reviews for As Dense as a Cloud|
| CSluvGCY chapter 3 . 11/2/2010
Aww.. How CUTE! Lol.
| ffangelwing chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
8D I love all 3 one-shots, simply amazing and that last lines in chapter 3 soooooo cute, please update again I'm really enjoying this.
| shynsei chapter 3 . 10/16/2010
You're pretty funny, keep up the good work :)
| RLoli chapter 3 . 10/16/2010
Teehee! Love, love, love.
| sakR9 chapter 3 . 10/16/2010
Best chapter yet :D
I'd love a bit more description to his injuries and how they happened ::exactly::, but the story was so good.
And lollllllllllll Cloud still had the Chocobo in his bag. How cute is that?
Cid correcting his grammar? Fantastic. Great, just great fic.
| sakR9 chapter 2 . 10/16/2010
Hahaha! This was good. My eyes were DYING to zoom to the bottom of the page to see why Cloud had fainted, but I was strong and read the whole thing through:D
I'm sure Tifa is upset that Cloud fainted just because she's pregnant... that doesn't bode well does it? :P He's so silly~
| sakR9 chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
This was really good! Nice following dialogue and cute situation~
Cloud is seriously one of the densest characters I've seen.
| cookies18 chapter 3 . 10/16/2010
Gosh, this is so hilarious~! I laughed so hard when Cloud commented on Aerith's shooting skill, oh oh, and when he asked her if she got something in her eyes! Poor Cloud. He is super duper dense. Lol.
I want a toy chocobo like that! \(_)/
| Runic Healer chapter 2 . 10/11/2010
... That was hilarious! It really is funny when guys pass out when they're told they're going to be daddies... Well, my dad didn't.
This is pretty cute BTW...
| Halan Lore chapter 2 . 10/9/2010
At the face of this, this is hilarious.
But it really isn't... cause who knows what (else) Hojo did to Cloud. And whatever Cloud has might afflict the poor kid.
But it's a good little story. You include all relevant information, and keep us hanging on til the punch line. So good work :D.
| RLoli chapter 2 . 10/8/2010
Please, please continue! So cute. I love it!
| R E C R A P T O R chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
Oh please! make htis a series.
this piece was great at least
| Snipergal7 chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
Jajaja. Thas was very, very funny. I really loved it. I'm adding this to my faves just to show you how much I liked it. Jejeje. Dense...jajajajaja.
| Angelgirl651 chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
So cute! Lol I hope you pick to make more!
| Rend chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Really cute and enjoyable, great work