Reviews for The Teacher
wsm021 chapter 12 . 8/8/2012
It's weird. I'm really enjoying this so far but the way Severus is reacting, his insecurities and the running away... in my head I can't help picturing him as a teen and it's throwing the whole thing off.
AlannaBenedicta chapter 30 . 8/8/2012
da du schreibst, dass du gerne Kommentare auf deutsch möchtest: bitteschön :-)
Nun zu dieser Geschichte...Wow, was soll ich sagen. Einfach wunderschön. Wie du die Emotionen beschreibst ist einfach unglaublich. Su bist total in den Charakteren geblieben und hast ein wunderschönes Bild von Snapes Innenleben gemalt. Es ist noch nicht häufig vorgekommen, dass eine fanfic mich zum Weinen gebracht hat, aber diese hat es geschafft. Ich muss auch sagen, ich habe mich die ganze Zeit vor dem Ende gefürchtet, da aus dem Buch ja hervorgeht wie es enden muss und du vorher geschrieben hast, dass nichts passiert was im Buch nicht so sein könnte. Aber auch das Ende ist wunderbar ausgeführt und bleibt dem Bild welches beim Lesen von Severus entsteht treu. Hut ab! Ich möchte dir sehr ans Herz weiter zu schreiben du hast wirklich Talent!
Vielen Dank für diese wunderschöne Geschichte!
Viele Grüße aus Österreich. :-)
Resevius chapter 30 . 8/6/2012
Okay, I'll try not to babble, but here it goes.
Oh my Gosh! I haven't cried so much while reading since Severus actually died. But it wasn't just sympathy for him that got to me, it was the fact that you practically took my own feelings for Severus and put them in writing. I've always envisioned him in that emotional way, and it was, for want of condensing this, so relieving to know I'm not the only one.
As for your writing, wow! You are incredible with character development. Everyone was in character, but so much more. I really admire the way you give so much detail about Severus's thoughts and emotions without getting way off track.
Madam Fist
Resevius chapter 22 . 8/6/2012
I wasn't sure how I'd feel about Severus and Remus going all the way, but you wrote this so well! Like everything else, you said it all without saying it all, if that makes any kind of sense. :) I really like that you weren't smutty or porno about it, you just presented the emotion and some facts. Great job! Madam Fist
Resevius chapter 12 . 8/6/2012
Hi MyMoony,
You're going to hear a lot more from me, because this was AMAZING! Regarding this chapter, aaawww! It was really sweet and tender and angsty and everything in between!
Madam Fist
lilydunlop123 chapter 31 . 8/4/2012
Loved it.
littleisle chapter 31 . 7/15/2012
I love your Severus Snape in this. I'm happy to see him dealing with Remus' betrayal in this way - not so forgiving.

I'm am not such a Remus sympathizer, so I'm more sympathetic that yet at the end, Severus is still suffering for rejecting Remus.
BlackDawnRose chapter 30 . 7/7/2012
Oh my god! I just read this entire story in one go and now I want to cry! This was such a sad ending and even though I was pretty much expecting one I still hoped things would go another way. Anyway, this story was just amazing, the characterisations were brilliantly done and I honestly cheered whenever something new developed between the pair, got angry with Snape and Lupin during the fights and wanted to sob with severus at the last chapter. I want to read he sequel but I think I'll have to wait for its completion if it's as angsty as this one, is it anywhere near done? Does it have a happy ending? I'll be so sad if it doesn't work out for the boys the pairing is so lovely. Anyway I'll stop babbling now. Brilliant story you wrote it spectacularly!

Casyn chapter 10 . 7/1/2012
Stunningly beautiful. I'll have to finish reading this story when it is not after 3 am. But this chapter was just so breath-taking.
Midnightforestry chapter 24 . 6/25/2012
You are an amazing writer! And this story is just- wow. The only reason I haven't commented on any other chapter is because that would be too many comments. Anywho amazing story!
Queenie chapter 31 . 5/29/2012
I love this story. It is my favorite Lupin/Snape. I am so excited you are making a sequel.
KnockerOnADoor chapter 30 . 5/22/2012
Finished the story. Loved it. It's now in the top 3 of my favorite Snupin stories. Just emotional, painful, and wonderful enough.

Since you asked in the author's note, my favorite chapter was Chapter 25: Wrong. Lupin's ability to forgive is astounding, while Snape can't even forgive himself. I loved that constrast between them and that chapter in particular pulled my heartstrings to breaking point. ;)

P.S. I agree with whoever said you could very well be a professional writer. And I'm glad that you decided to begin writing Journey. :)
strix noctis chapter 31 . 5/18/2012
Ohh... Wie schön, dass Du Dich entschlossen hast Deine wunderbar poetische und intelligen durchkomponierte Geschichte doch noch fortzufühhren (ich habs ja nicht mehr zu hoffen gewagt... ;) ).

Viel Spass beim Schreiben!
the0racle chapter 31 . 5/18/2012
Excellent - am really excited for Journey :)
Resident Evil Lionhart chapter 31 . 5/17/2012
Please finish Journey! I would love to read OotP from Severus' Pov! I love this story!
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