Reviews for Barely Breathing
Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2018
All those lyrics at the end ruined this chapter for me.
drotuno chapter 6 . 9/21/2017
I just read this while avoiding adulting at work. Thank you for this sweet story.

Deb
ChristyWIX chapter 6 . 2/6/2015
Again, quite hot for your first time at bat! Kudos. We know she wants to get married. We know he does. Yet all the drama mentioned at the beginning was just brushed aside for sex. Nothing was resolved :(
ChristyWIX chapter 5 . 2/6/2015
It was a wee bit odd that they would immediately jump into bed together after what just happened, without talking it out first. Yes, what you wrote was pretty hot . . . . damn good for your very first attempt even . . . just didn't fit in with the timing of this storyline.
ChristyWIX chapter 4 . 2/6/2015
I'm so glad he realized what was wrong right away. I'm also glad he didn't leave her a message . . . because anything he would've said at that moment, would'nt have rung true. It was sad when he went to their bedroom and picked up her dress, holding it while he slept on her pillow. Emmett led Edward the right direction. Letting him know he has to fix it. That work is never more important than the two of them. If he already had the ring of four years . . . and they've been nothing but in love . . . why hasn't he proposed yet? Very odd. I loved that they found each other on the street, already running to the other. It was odd that he thought 'her warm heat against his hard length'. Very odd.
ChristyWIX chapter 3 . 2/6/2015
Good for her. Go Bella, fight and win! If you really want something in life . . . you've got to be the one to go out and get it. I can't even imagine what's going through his head right now. She left, with no communication whatsoever. Communication is terrifically important in relationships. Had they even discussed this at all? Did he even know she was at her breaking point? Does she know why he's been working so very hard?
ChristyWIX chapter 2 . 2/6/2015
So sad. She's given up, yet still fully loves him. She wants to get married but, I don't understand why. She was upset that things are not going well in the relationship enough to leave him. Did she think getting married would fix that? That would not be a reason to get married. Their love would but, he would need to be around more often. Again working your life away, is not living your life.
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 2/6/2015
Aw, so sad. When one works so hard to have a great life . . . what life do they have but work? You have to live the life you've been given, you can't let it slip past you like he was doing. Cliché as it sounds, you only have one life to live.
Hhays3 chapter 6 . 10/20/2013
Loved it!
Reader-many chapter 6 . 10/7/2013
That was great thanks for sharring
Reader-many chapter 5 . 10/7/2013
I am glad they rw think everything ... I am so behind in readings this last couple of weeks have been busy ones
KimiD chapter 2 . 10/3/2013
Boy that must have left an impression on Edward with her leaving that there...
twiclare chapter 6 . 10/1/2013
The bitchy vindictive part of me thinks she let him off too easily! But in reality well done Bella for not letting hurt feelings and pride stand in the way of their future happiness!
twiclare chapter 4 . 10/1/2013
At least he's realised where he's gone wrong and that he almost threw her away!
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