Reviews for And Then She Jumped Him
guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
Lol cute, Nathan and Audrey are amazing together. Thanks for sharing. :)
Nathascha chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
well, aren't they cute...

I liked teh idea of Audrey discovering Natahn can feel her on her own. You handled it well. Congrats. Thank you for writing
RLBB chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Ohhh very very very cute :) And an adorable ending. Nice job!
0appletree0 chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
love it!
DivineMist chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Excellent story, very in character.

I loved this :D
RT4ever chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
OMG the writing in this is AMAZING. Like truly fabulous. Great work.
KellethMetheus chapter 1 . 3/29/2011
This one left me with a smile. Thanks for sharing.

Kelleth
Famous4it chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
Loved this! The emotions were quite intense, but still lighthearted; gave it a nice feel. Hope you write more)
Ayjah chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
She is far from stupid. After all she is FBI.
nebakanezer chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
I loved it! And these lines are just so perfect:

He takes a single step back from her and she stares at the space between them, catalogs the inches of distance: one inch for every time she's ever run away from someone important, a half inch for every lie she's ever told a guy to get out of going on a date, a quarter inch for every lie she's ever told herself.

It was adorable that he braced himself and waited for her.

:) Great job!
Lai Jun Chen chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
so bloody cute!
jayma chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
LOVE IT!
11nivea342 chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
Perfect!
AppleLass chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
Perfect!
jackiemack916 chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
This made me laugh, you have them both pegged perfectly. I would suggest upping the rating a bit (I just feel that way about dropping the f-bomb). Other than that, your grammar looked great and I really enjoyed this.
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