Reviews for Blue in the Hours of Darkness
Madchickenlover chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
Congratulations! You captured the human emotion.

For someone who doesnt cry, you had me very close.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Really HOT! ...but you really need to look over your story.

At the part after where Abe takes off his shorts is where the spelling, grammar, and punctuation need to come in. If those grammar mistakes were purposeful, please, at least, dont write smut for this pairing at least.

You did a pretty good job with the content though, expressing how Abe is dealing with Nuala's death, and... how he... relieves himself... But you made it sexy(and that's a good thing).

Please please PLEASE revise this! I like reading smut, but only if the content(which you nailed) and the grammar is good!

Lynrinth chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
Excellent. You captured the power of his loneliness, sexual frustration, and most of all, his emotional pain. Bravo.